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Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2016 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 44

I really dislike Madison by the way. I'm waiting for the moment that the power grows to her head or that she makes stupid mistakes endangering everyone around her. I actually like it that Adelina turns into her mom, giving her feelings of guilt in a very subtle way. If Madison saw Michael come out that back happy full of tears/joy that his mother came for him, that would really play on her conscience. The longer Adelina searches for Michael and act like the mother would also have great effect making her feel more bad every second.
What would Mirielle feel about al of this if she is in the same room with them searching for Michael. She has seen things and experienced things that would change your views on life. Would she give up out of fear or be more determined to have that power or at least some little people to play with. What has Adelina promised to Madison? If Madison knows she is going to receive/learn those abillities from Adelina, than her lecturing Mirielle about wanting that power is beyond hypocrite.
I'm just finding more reasons the really dislike Madison. ;)

Just can't wait for that scene with the three of them in one room. Hope it is in the next chapter.

 

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2016 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 44

Wonder what Adelina is up too. There has to be more going on than just testing someone. It is like she needs something from this whole process to solve some big problem. She holds all the cards in this game. Changing into Michael's mother was more to provoke Madison, than to catch Michael. That had to hurt Madison a lot. Everytime she would open her mouth in that form had to hurt Madison.
Adelina is just having fun seeing this al unfold. Wonder what Madison and Mirielle discussed in that room.

Lucie has little chance but I like her sense of justice. It is not bad to give in some urges as long as she can let Michael have fun too and looks out for his well being. What those other girls did to him could have killed him and at least scar him for life. Mirielle was a little more tactful, but still at sometimes too rude forgetting about Michael's mental state.

Can't wait for the next chapter, want to see how those 3 will interact with eachother in the Hearst home and if Adelina still is in that form of Madison's mother keeping the charade up to search for Michael while knowing Lucie has him.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2016 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 44

I like where this is going. I really hope Lucie gives in and does what her body desires.

I bet it temps Lucie, that there is a tiny, young man in her hand, at her mercy and she can do anything she wants and no one or nothing can stop her.

Yes, she too will enjoy the power of a giantess.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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