[Report This]Date: November 11 2015 10:10 PM Title: I: Moving On (Introductory)
More booty please!?? And so far it's perfect!!!! I need more booty! Maybe Sam will use her booty after the gym! Maybe eat some gassy foods? Idk if you would write about a gassy booty but it's like the ultimate humiliating torture >:) keep it up and the chapters long
Author's Response:
Will keep it in mind while writing thank you :)
[Report This]Date: October 31 2015 11:32 AM Title: I: Moving On (Introductory)
I really liked reading the first story and this one is starting off even better! Im a big fan of giantess butt so I hope there is lots of that in here :) keep it up you're doing good just stay detailed and keep the chapters nice and long lol
Author's Response:
Thank you and yeah I will keep that in mind :)
Date: October 31 2015 7:19 AM Title: I: Moving On (Introductory)
This is good, but do you think you could put some space in between the paragraphs? You've basically created a wall of text in the majority of the story which makes it pretty difficult to read.
Author's Response:
Thank you, and I most certainly should have done that earlier. Updated it now thank you for reminding.