Giantess World
Reviews For Dance of the Phantom
Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2015 12:57 AM Title: His Own Fate
Author's Response:
Date: October 31 2015 12:57 AM Title: His Own Fate
Oops I didn't see that, only read the synopsis. My apologies. Your writing is a bit rusty but this story has potential, hope it turns out great.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yeah, definitely extremely rusty. Hopefully the writing itself will get better as the story progresses.
Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2015 12:10 AM Title: Unlikely Assistance
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Date: October 31 2015 12:10 AM Title: Unlikely Assistance
I was very confused by the chapters but now its clear, the world you described is of a different universe or dimension from ours. Maybe you should rewrite the synopsis or else it may confuse people .
Author's Response:
Sorry for the confusion! I thought the chapter notes at the start of the first chapter covered that.
Reviewer: SheerForce Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2015 12:31 PM Title: His Own Fate
Date: October 30 2015 12:31 PM Title: His Own Fate
Simply put, good start.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Hopefully it turns out as good as it is in my head.