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Reviewer: sarashrunk Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2015 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 2 : Is This Just Fantasy?

Very good.

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Reviewer: Giantess_Joey Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2015 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 2 : Is This Just Fantasy?

The chapter wasn't as long as it could've been, but I won't go into detail about it because you hate that kind of stuff and so do I when people comment on my story.

Saying that I feel that this story is leading up to something good...... I'll keep my eye on this one.

Author's Response:

I hate what kind of stuff? If you have something to say, do tell.

As for the length of the chapter, I dislike long chapters as it's hard for me to drone on and on about the same thing constantly. It just puts me to sleep. Although I will try to lengthen the chapters starting with the next one.

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