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Reviewer: HuzToru Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2016 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Cool story bro, but make sure to add "" when a character is speaking. Other than that this was a short sweet read.

Reviewer: hunterfury22 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2015 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hmm really wish you didn't make another story. The last one was a perfect ending and I didn't like how this one played out. It didn't fit with the others.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2015 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 10

Surprisingly short. But, undeniably sweet, none-the-less. Thanks for posting it!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2015 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2015 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 8

I was going to say something about "the shoe being on the other foot." But, I don't want to give Tom Speedy anything more to groan about.

;-D

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 5

So, let me get this straight. He dumps Katie after a weekend ski trip where he (apparently) also had a fling with this Mia. And, at the same time, he's got a major crush on Madi?

To call this guy a "horn dog" would be an understatement!!!

Reviewer: Giantess_Joey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 5

Really enjoying this story so far! Please keep adding frequently because this story has a lot of potential and I really enjoy it.

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