Reviews For Family Potluck
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Reviewer: Saftkeur Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2017 2:17 AM Title: Sub Sandwich

Ah, of course I've gotta leave a review on this chapter! You handled the suggestion admirably, as you have been for all the rest. It was some creative work with the mustard bottle in particular, getting stuck right in the nozzle like that... and Zoey came so close to noticing what was going on, but no luck, it seems. :P

I'm looking forward to seeing where else you go, you've been throwing in some little twists and turns lately and it's piquing my curiousity more and more.



Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it!

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