Reviews For Family Potluck
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Reviewer: Jacksmith Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09 2017 5:04 AM Title: Honey & Juice

I like the concept of this story; straightforward action anthologies don't get enough attention, and you picked a good style for setting up scenarios. The reader/audience participation is a neat touch. Focusing on the experience of the tiny on the food is a subtle perspective often neglected in vore stories, so kudos there. I'm not crazy about the amount of butt inclusion in what's mostly an unaware vore story, since it tends to feel less natural in the flow of the action, but that's less a complaint and more just an observation, since the tags and request descriptions make it clear that's just part of the package. Overall, good stuff here.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy it!

Reviewer: GTSaddict Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23 2017 3:40 AM Title: Honey & Juice

Love it! glad you're working on it again. How about an uncle and aunt with a whole bunch of kids all swimming in macaroni and cheese?

Author's Response: Sounds like a great idea!

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