[Report This]Date: December 21 2016 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
Just read this through, from the very beginning, in one sitting, ...I couldn't stop! ;)
Awesome setup, very realistic characters, and the pace is near perfection. From your exceptional descriptions, I could easily visualize these towering teen beauties. Their dialog - absolutely - was spot on, ( I could almost hear the sound of their voices) especially interesting when talking to their victim, while playfully teasing him at the same time.
The atmosphere that you've created in the school, and outside on the grounds, at home at Mo's house, ...wow, I felt slightly taken aback...
....reminded me of being back in school myself! Lol! ;`)
Love to see 'Nick' continued as well... yeah, I've been following you - Great Stuff Dude!
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to share some awesome feedback. I have a habit of getting ahead of thoughts and writing myself into a corner then leaving the story while I try to refocus my energies. I am currently retooling this story because it's a fun write. Similarly I really like Nick and intend to return to it at some point in the future... Again thanks for the input is it always valuable and very much appreciated :)
Date: January 24 2016 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 18
You are an absolutely incredible writer! An inspiration to say the least.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the praise. I hope I can continue to provide material you find entertaining. :)
Date: December 03 2015 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 18
I thought the girls were more into using their tinies as toys, not simply eating them all. Are they just trying to scare Mo?
Does this mean Sly is going to be returned to normal size? Was kinda hoping once shrunk, always shrunk; but hey it is as you write it.
Tom being swallowed, if it's going to happen then hopefully it will be Miss Mackenzie whose stomach turns him to mush (guess Len really did digest in Susannah's tummy)
By re-assimilate is Mo finally going to get aquainted with Miss Mackenzie's lightning bolt pupes? Will Mo realize being a tiny belonging to the Furies and Miss Mackenzie is what he wants more than getting stoned or restored?
Are we ever to find out what happened to therest of the "missing people / tinies"?
Perhaps Mo will "re-assimilate" as Miss Mackenzie's panty liner or thong.
Normally I truly like your work; but this time I have to complaim. Reading this is like being brought to the edge and then told "You have to wait till next week". I think in your previous life you castrated unics. Salma Hayek in panies and bra is less of a tease than you are. HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA Keep up the terrific story!!!
[Report This]Date: December 02 2015 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
Yes, Morris should definately get acquainted with Ms. Mackenzie soon. I think my prediction was right. I still think she is the one with the mark on her vagina.
I was right about Ms. Mackenzie being involved with these Graces. When she said that he was going to be prepared, I got excited. Then when Elisha came in, I got disappointed. These girls have had enough fun. Still waiting for Ms. Mackenzie do have some fun.
I'm noting a teenage girl takeover in your stories. First, Janine with Tom, no indication of being with Lina. Amanda and Pete. Story ends midway through her first taste of fun. Now this,where Elisha kinda steals Morris from Ms. Mackenzie. Milfs need a stand soon.
I hope it's coming soon. I can't wait for the next chapter!