[Report This]Date: November 04 2015 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 15
Ms. Mackenzie has the Lightning bolt! I said it was either her or Silke, and since we now know that Silke has a smooth crotch, it's gotta be Ms. Mackenzie.
The way she seduces him in class unintentionally and makes suggestive comments. In addition she always leans forward to show off her cleavage to him. It's gotta be her, and I can't wait.
Back to this chapter. Where da fuq did Silke come from. Mo was in sex heaven with the Graces and now he is with Silke.
I love what she is doing with Mo, playing with him in her panties. You need to do this more often. Have women constantly take men out of panties and put them back in, then do it over again. Make them stay in her panties all day. That's the dream. If only Ms. Mackenzie does that. Maybe she does. Maybe that's why she seems always sexy, there is probably some little dude who got some private lessons with her and became her personal plaything. Now I'm freaking out with excitement!
I really like where this is going, a mystery with sexy stuff. Yes, please.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Lol maybe she does have the bolt maybe not. I'm still trying to Mai tain some interest through suspense with this story though I feel it may be wrapping up sooner than later.
Date: November 04 2015 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 15
I hope Silke cums on Mo a few times, maybe even getting completely stuck to her panty to the point of needing to be washed off.
Now if Silke is one of the Graces, is she in on her brother Sly's "disappearance? Hmmm, if Sly were to have accidentally witnessed Tom getting shrunk, there's always the chance he begged one of the other Graces to shrink and own him, so Silke may have taken pity and reluctantly agreed. Hey, just making things up here as I ramble on; but which Grace would Sly have chosen and what would he beg her to do with him. After all, Susannah did swallow Len {Is he still alive, or at least alive as a human or alive as Susannah's poop, perhaps constipation, HA HAAA}
Perhaps Mo, Tom and Sly could have a happy "little" reunion and Tom and Sly can tell Mo how much they either hate or love their new place in life and their new owners. If Tom isn't loving being in Kimber's bra, well he needs to start smoking higher quality stuff; and who if anyone is in Kimber's other bra cup? Sly?
This is one of those stories I wish I'd come upon once it was finished. Waiting for the next chapter is like a Chinese water torture. UUGH!
Nice writing style by the way. Keep em coming.
Author's Response:
Lol waiting is the worst. I still haven't seen your story cross the wire here. We shall soon learn the breadth of the females involved and the fates of Tom and Sly. Soonish