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Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2015 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 11

Would have liked for it to be a bit longer and have more story progression but it was a good chapter nonetheless.



Author's Response:

Next chapter will see more significant story development, i just wanted to paint a clearer picture of Silke, is she or isn't she involved?

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2015 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 11

I have a feeling that it's not the last time he looked at her crotch.

We saw another clue that Silke could be a Grace. Alright, I think that's enough evidence to conclude that she is a Grace. In fact, all those pretty women are Graces, or Graces in disguise.

If the Graces were a school club, Ms. Mackenzie would be in charge of it, Kimber, Elisha, and Sussanah are the top memebers, and Silke is like a runner up or something. That's how I see it.

Do people talk about crotches that casually? I mean, although it may have been awkward, Silke made it unawkward by continuing to talk and answer Mo's questions. In fact, it wasn't really that awkward at all. If Silke just sat there silent after each thing, then it would be truly awkward. Silke kinda encouraged him to talk about her crotch, like she had to shame of discussing it. Perhaps it's a clue that she also has no shame of using it. :0

Well Tom got kidnapped at his house, so perhaps this is when Mo gets kidnapped. Kidnapping never sounded so sexy. (Weird huh?)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Pretty girls everywhere, not all are involved, or maybe it's just an aesthetic conspiracy, :)

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