Another Aedin fan? Can someone just fuck him already? Please Daphne. Just do it.

I'm getting a bit tired of all these Aedin Stary references. I like the connections, but not when one connection gets used over and over again.

Love how you skim over the boring classes and write out details on the awesome class. (Ms. Mackenzie.)

When you describe the outfit of some woman, I always get butterflies in my stomach because she is a possible giantess candidate. I would love her to be my giantess.

Whoa, whoa whoa! "Hint of something floral lingering"?!!! That's the dream! That's it! Ms. Mackenzie was in Mo's room! I don't know why, but Mo is smelling the same thing he smelled this morning!

Did Ms. Mackenzie just call Mo handsome? Wtf. I wish hot teachers actually say that in real life. Let alone finding a hot teacher is difficult enough.

(At this point, I just read that Mo connected the dots about Ms. Mackenzie and his dream. Now my review looks a bit stupid. I review as I'm reading which usually makes my review long, but now it just looks bad. But at least you can see I connected the dots before Mo did.)

Years worth of detention? You know what? If Ms. Mackenzie is as hot as you describe, then that 1 year of detention would actually be a great thing.

When Kimber and Elisha were in the hall, I would've gone back into Ms. Mackenzie's room. Just as I thought that, a hand went in his shoulder. Obviously, it has to be Ms. Mackenzie's hand.

This now begs the question. Is Ms. Mackenzie working with these lovely ladies? I hope so, it would make an interesting group. It also reminds us that the sexy ones are smart and cunning.

You know Duggernaut, I really like Mo's position in this story so much that it has taken my priority to this story over Tom's story. (Gasp!). Mo, is in a state of heaven. Sexy cliffhanger. Tom on the other hand is going to Janine, who is sexy, don't get me wrong, but the thrill of these Graces and Ms. Mackenzie is too much. This is now my favorite story at the moment. Good job.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Ooooh, got you hooked. I think this one is appealing to you because of recent developments in Tom's Story (but not to worry, all is unfolding properly). Ok no more Injustice cheap shots and Aedin Stray, I almost promise, More suspense this chapter, but we are getting closer and closer to that big reveal, *rubs his hands together evilly*

I think this is a chapter meant for your story "Botched" {ha ha, kinda ironic, sorry, had to kid ya about it}