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Reviewer: iHategiants666 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2015 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day

Oy vey... you ever gonna fix the tagline to your story?

 

Hint: (defet)



Author's Response:

Thought I already changed it but I'll do that ASAP. Thanks for letting me know.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2015 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 7: Showdown

Thrilling end to the story, does this mean Omega will come back?



Author's Response:

Maybe he will, maybe he will.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2015 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day

Ouch, so small but so deadly! Hang in there Jessica!



Author's Response:

Yep size isn't everything.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2015 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day

  So it starts, Omega's evil plan and already our heroes are trapped. 



Author's Response:

INDEED!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2015 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day

Jessica's first encounter with Omega only she doesn't know it yet. Dawn will be starting school soon and I hope it goes well. 



Author's Response:

Everything will come to pass soon

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2015 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 3: Buried Treasure

I'm waiting in anticipation for that action! Really nice chapter.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. I'm guessing the fact that there was a sex scene didn't sway your opinion.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2015 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 3: Buried Treasure

Roleplaying? Cool scene between the two and now I guess we know how Tucker catches up on Earth entertainment. 

Loved this chapter so much!



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you did. Hopefully others did too.

Reviewer: wwebby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2015 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 2: Riot!

I admit to not having read the other accounts of your story series, however, this is quite intriguing and very enjoyable!



Author's Response:

You really should read the original series at least

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2015 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 2: Riot!

Ultron...in the flesh. 



Author's Response:

Not so much the flesh.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2015 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day

I wonder if Dawn is a difficult child? Because if she is then leaving Tucker alone with her could be dangerous, just saying. I've met little kids that would destroy their parents during a tantrum if they had the strength to, and Dawn goes far beyond just "more strength" in comparison to her normal human father. Anyway, I'm looking forward to this one, it's not a prequel so I have no excuses not to read it.



Author's Response:

Well Dawn might be relatively well behaved, we'll have to see. Prequels aren't all that bad.

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2015 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day

Just a quick question-

How long will it take for you to update another chapter?

Also I forgot to rate in the previous review.



Author's Response:

It'll be a week before the next chapter is released. That's the rate that I write and thanks for the rating.

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2015 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day

Wow. I loved it!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you do.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2015 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 1: Like Any Normal Day

Nice start, a lot of catching up and it seems Jessica is only getting stronger too!



Author's Response:

Well intense training will do that to a girl.

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