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Reviewer: iHategiants666 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27 2015 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 14. Progress

Don't tell me... Kelly's going over to the Big Apple to pay a visit to the United Nations Building. I doubt it will be occupied... unless PIS occurs.

(No offense, but what happened to Archer and Sykes was stupid and so would this be.)

Now... what about Casey? Is she dead? Or...?



Author's Response:

Well, you'll see it soon enough. I'll be posting the next chapter in a few hours. I guess that we have different definitions of what is stupid. I didn't think that you were still feeling sour for what happened to Archer and Sykes ;)

And about Casey... you'll see next week.

Cheers!

Reviewer: officerkc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2015 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 14. Progress

Wow! So glad you were able to post this this week. What a great episode. Had some fun story building while still a lot of fun. Great great chapter! Can't wait for next one! 



Author's Response:

Yes! It was a challenging weekend, but finally I managed to post it. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. There was quite a lot of story building in this one, since there were some storylines that had been craving for attention for a while. But still, the set up allowed for quite some action to be included, so I'm happy that the chapter could be fun as well.

The story is heading towards its conclusion (it will be a long conclusion, though). I'd say that the next chapter will probably be the last of the second act and will open it up for the third and final act, which will be VERY packed with action (and, of course, the plot conclusion, where I think there are still some surprises to be had)...

As usual, thanks for the feedback!

Cheers!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2015 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 14. Progress

Is Casey gonna be the first to grow then? She wasnt near death was she?



Author's Response:

I'm afraid that you will need to wait a couple of weeks to find out... next week will be all about Kelly. I'll be eager to read what you think once the "mistery is revealed"

Cheers!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2015 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 14. Progress

I think Casey is either dead or going to wake up and her height will be measured in miles(or kilometres  depending on where you are from.) Kelly won't be the biggest girl anymore and well, she'll need to get really big now. Lisa should not shrink down, not yet at least. 

 

Great chapter, a lot of development here!



Author's Response:

Well, you'll have to wait a couple of weeks to find out. Next week the focus will switch back to Kelly. After next week's chapter everything is going to start moving towards the conclusion. It will be a long wrap up, though :)

I'm glad that you liked the chapter. Volume 3 has a lot of plot development (at least from my point of view), but I know that some storylines had been underused for a while and that Kelly's could start to feel less original to some readers (others loved it). The ending of the story will be richer, since it will develop some of the storylines that had been set aside for a while.

As usual, thanks for the feedback!

Cheers!

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