[Report This]Date: October 18 2015 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 9. Prodigal daughter
Loved the ending of this chapter! A great story just got better! :-D
Keep up
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm guessing you're like vore?
Anyway, thanks for thaking the time to share your thoughts with me. I always enjoy it when I get feedback from someone new. I'll defiitely keep up with the story. I'd like to ask you to keep letting me know what you think!
Cheers!
Date: October 18 2015 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 9. Prodigal daughter
Nice chapter! Good to see another, perhaps less monstrous side of Casey where she seems to sort of care about her own family abit. Hey, she didn't turn her cousin into paste did she? Anyway, I guess the end sort of countered that since she began to eat people as a food source. I'm still wondering how the other two girls are going to deal with this, Kelly especially. She's gonna need an even more ridiculous amount of food!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Well, part of my objective in this chapter was to give Casey a little more substance. In her last few chapters, all she seemed to be able to do was to turn everyone into paste, but I did not think that she would behave as a mindless rampaging monster once she was back in a place that mattered to her like her hometown, with people she knew.
Of course, this does not mean that she is not a monster anymore. She couldn't care less about who dies because of her and she won't have any hesitation to kill whoever she sees fit, but her cousin is not on the list of people she would turn into a stain under her soles on sight. As a matter of fact, no one she knows is on that list, since these people wll be split between the ones she would spare and the ones she would pay more personal attention than just stomping on them.
The fact that she started eating people also shows how mean she is no matter what, of course. As I explained in the answer to the previous reviewer, I'm not a vore fan, so I hesitated on whether I should include this in the story. But in the end, my thinking was similar to what you mentioned in your review last week: the girls need to it. They are bigger but they seem to have regular physical needs. And most people will do almost anything when they're hungry. Well, while Casey is not dying of hunger, she is the one whose morals were likely to make the switch faster. So, when she feels hungry and realizes that regular food is either too scarce or that it will take her too much effort to find enough of it to feed herself, making the mental switch where she considers people as a valid source of food was easy enough for her.
Will Kelly do the same? Well, no matter how delusional she is becoming, she has already had the chance one and rejected it. Kelly is still set on ruling over humanity and her thought process at this moment is that she cannot expect people to accept her as a ruler if they see her feeding on them. Even if she is way more dangerous than Casey because of her size, Kelly's morals are still at a different level.
Anyway, the future chapters will tell what happens.
As usual, thanks for reviewing.
Cheers!
[Report This]Date: October 17 2015 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 9. Prodigal daughter
Love it love it love it!!!! This was an amazing chapter! We all know Casey wants to get bigger. Can she? What about her cousin? Will she get big too? Loved the core part of it even though I'm not a core guy. As usual what an awesome chapter! Can't wait for next week!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it so much. I thought that Casey's storyline deserved a little more substance than just mindless rampaging. Of course, her "lack" of rampaging has ended up with several people dead and a dozen in her stomach and there is no doubt that she is a monster.
Now, the question of whether Casey can get bigger is really the key question of her storyline, isn't she? Depending on the answer, the story overall will evolve on one direction or the other. So... I'm not going to explain it, of course! Same for Mandy (even if she is just a supporting character).
As for the vore part: I'm not a fan either. I could not write a story focused on it or even one where the girls enjoy this partcular aspect so much that they do it over and over again. I really hesitated on whether to include it or not in Side Effects. Then, I thought: Casey is hungry. She hasn't eaten in all day and every source of food seems to be too small or to require too much effort. Would she, under these circumstances, consider to eat people? The answer was obvious!
Thanks for the feedback, as usual. Next week's chapter is a relevant one. I'd say that while this week's chapter marked the transition from Casey's introductorty chapters to the real action, next week's will be Kelly's (in a very different way, of course).
Cheers!