Reviews For Anna's Awakening
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Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2016 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 40

This story seems far from over. Some questions:

1) How did Imogen survive without any warding?

2) What happens now that Rachel has discovered a shrunken man?

3) How does Anna get to the state she's in in the first chapter? She doesn't seem that sadistic yet.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the questions. I did leave this tale with a few loose threads and could certainly have continued it but chose this point as my exit. To address your questions. 1. Imogen survived with Anna’s and Veronica intervention though she was greatly damaged by Inanna. Further Imogen's resistance while far less than Anna’s assisted the others in helping defeat Inanna. 2. In my mind Rachel discovered Valen and that could a whole other story. :) 3. The Anna we see in chapter 1 is unleashed at the end of chapter 9 when drunken Jerry tries to force himself on her. At that point Inanna's influence over Anna is very strong. We see elements of that same kind of influence in Imogen affecting her dreams though the second gathering hastily preempted their preparations to perform the rite so the influence was lessened plus Inanna was still weakened from the attempt to inhabit Anna.

I hope I have adequately addressed the very valid concerns you've listed. Thanks again.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2016 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 40

I liked this story. It was a fun read about taking revenge on very horrible people. But alas, it is not really finished. Anna and Veronica still aren't safe yet. Hope they can defeat all their enemies for good, so they can enjoy their powers without having to battle the goddess inside of them. They deserve some happiness after what they've been through. Veronica even managed to get a fun pet out of it.

 



Author's Response:

Lol no they're never really finished though I did want some measure of closure. Rachel going to the house and finding a litthe one (Jim, Valen, and Trent were all there) left an opening. Darlene and her next attempt. I never clarified veronica mother's fate or Imogen's parents. Where do they go from here? So yeah I left a lot on the table and found myself attracted to other projects. There about a half dozen others works on the go and I'm still trying to rework Mo's Story. Hopefully one of the new ones catches your interest. :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2016 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 40

What an epic conclusion! Much better than Hell Hath no Fury's conclusion. This one did not feel rushed and it end beautifully.

I'm not sure where did a tiny person come from, but it does leave me imagine all sorts of possibilities.

Bravo!

I can't wait for your next story!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom. Please let me reiterate how much it means to have you along as the story unfolds. I love your input and look forward to the next one as well!

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