Date: June 15 2016 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 39
I have this feeling that this is a trap for Anna. Rose knows a lot of this ritual and I think Rose wants the goddess to destroy Anna.
Darlene assumes that her meeting was performed correctly and thinks that Rose's ritual is the same. Hopefully, Darlene is just saying these things just to give Anna a chance to arrive on time.
So Veronica is coming and Veronica's mom is already there. I think Veronica is the trump card here. She is the unexpected powerful girl since everyone just thinks it's just Anna.
What if Anna finds Imogen and has some lesbian fun before the ritual contaminating her body and therefore preventing the goddess from taking control. Nah, that would be too easy. I expect some supernatural fight going to happen.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom as I respond to this review I have already completed the story and glad you liked this better than some of the others.
Date: June 15 2016 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 39
I skipped this over for a long time. I figured that I wouldn't like something that's very violent. A few days ago, I read the first chapter on a whim, with a bit of trepidation. Good in medias res start. I got curious about how things got to that point. I read on, and I really liked it, and I can see why. It is violent, sure, but it comes out of interesting characters. I was able to enjoy that, whereas in a porn without plot story, there is no character development to do that. I also like the Sumerian elements and this story's approach to magic. It reminds of things I read about a long time ago, and haven't touched in ages. Keep going, I like this current direction, and I want to see what ultimately becomes of Anna and Veronica, and everyone around them.
Author's Response:
I very much appreciate the fact you were able to overcome the initial intro for this story to find the currents layered within it. I am often times conflicted on justification for action, why would someone do that? I wanted to show sacrifice and betrayal with damaged elements that keep you guessing. While I write this I have essentially wrapped this story up though like most others there are lingering questions. Again thank you for taking the time to read this story and share a review. :)