Reviews For Anna's Awakening
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Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2016 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 33

Poor lamb. So silly, innocent, fool and helpless. Can't take care of itself neither choose what is best for its own. No wonder its need guidance from a shepherd, otherwise it would simply jump out of a cliff without even realizing the danger. Now we have two wolves protecting and loving their precious little lamb, separating it from the rest of others that are just food, their little best friend they love it so much and so dear. This one is special... The silly lamb just need to realizes that. Silly, foolish humans can't even see the truth before their eyes.



Author's Response:

Very astute and keen understanding of this chapter as the 'girls' try to educate their small seemingly irrational friend. "You don't need to be afraid so why do you tremble so lititle one?"

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2016 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 33

Well, this is quite a transition chapter. Valen wakes up and understands his position.

The whole chapter was the girls explaining what happened. It was very nice, but I felt like a little more could've been added this time.

Still, I envy Valen. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I wanted to demonstrate the widening gap between the girls and everyone else. They think nothing of their fun with him and he is becoming more and more afraid of them. The story is about to take shift very quickly

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