Reviews For Anna's Awakening
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Reviewer: Tigernach Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2016 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 29

You have provided us with a story so intriging that since my previous comments, I have not been able to move away from the story. Now, I can only wait for the next chapters, hoping they are not too long in coming!



Author's Response:

Wow, it looks like you powered through this whole story is fairly short order. Thank you very much for providing insight and thought along your read (the drug/dragged was very helpful). I had stepped away from this story for a while unsure of how I wanted it to proceed but have since returned with more chapters coming very soon. Please continue to share your thoughts and opinions as we delve deeper. :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25 2016 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 29

Well, this was quite a return. For some reason, I actually remember these characters and I didn't have to read prevoius chapters about it.

Interesting to see Veronica all aggressive like Anna was.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

the adage power corrupts, absolute power corrupts absolutely. The seems to be nothing to stop these girls...seems :o

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2016 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 29

So surprised, and incredibly happy, to receive the e-mail notification of new chapters from this story! Really, really like the details on feelings described. Especially for Anna now that she has this absurd amount of power and superiority compared to all others. I feel frightened for those she loathe now, like Trent, which already has a doom clock on their lives; and also can't help but to tremble, feel a mix of awe, 'safe fear', love and protection for those she likes/loves/craves, like Velen or Jim. Things that Veronica seems to also be learning and experiencing now. Wonder how long the humanity will last, or if all she will crave will be the feeling on its own and what they can give to her, like a product, treating others as nothing more like precious 'treasures' of feelings to be harvested and consumed. Without any real feel for them.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the read and review LJin, sorry it's been so long (vgiv gave me a nudge and reminded me there was still some unfinished business here). The real battle coming for Anna and Veronica will be not distancing themselves from humanity or the human condition because once they are able to objectify human beings, they lose he ability to empathize making it easier to do whatever they want. You may see some of that put to the test very soon...

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