Reviews For Anna's Awakening
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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 21

Wow, she removed his old age! That's amazing! For a second I thought 25 would be ideal because it's old enough to do certain things that a teenager couldn't do.

Imagine if Jim tried to do something that he needs to be 21 and older. He would miss that. People would not let him do stuff. I bet Jim will miss those activities. Maybe 17/18 is too young?

Anna might as well turn everyone around her into someone attractive. Imagine walking in a city, and everyone is attractive. (Reminds me of college.)

I wonder what Anna plans to do next. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I had her reduce his age to mirror her own, given that would be her logical frame of reference. Being 17 or 18 with driver's licence thats says 70 might be difficult to pull off. Anna is struggling with her ability to control her impulses, be they angry, libidinous or otherwise, the challenge for her will be to refrain from zapping anyone who tries to meddle with her

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