Date: May 26 2016 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm sorry to have to mention this, but you have used this non-verb too many times:
drug -- is a noun only for medical and recreational materials;
dragged -- is the correct form for the verb 'drag', as in drag, dragged.
Author's Response:
You are absolutely correct and thank you for bringing this to my attention. I have fixed this one and have also discovered the improper usage of the same in two other of my stories. thanks :)
[Report This]Date: September 16 2015 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
Did I just see a force field? Lol. What is this magic?
Wow, Adam died just like that. No mercy from anyone, they regarded him and even Anna as filth.
Wow, Anna literally fought herself. She was punching, thrashing and even scratching herself till she was bleeding. However, the weakened body only makes Anna suffer and the goddess will likely rise and that's exactly what happened.
Blazing green eyes. So now people know it's a goddess. If she walks on the street, anyone can see her eyes and be scared.
What I wonder, is that is Anna really gone? Adam told her to remember what he taught her, but that's not important anymore if she is dead. Also, Anna lost this battle so I bet Anna will do something surprising later on which means that I don't think she is completely dead.
I hope that smile from the goddess means that she can destroy all these "servants" of her.
Now that would be awesome.
I can't wait for the next chapter!