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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2015 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 7

So Dad's coming back. I wonder if this is a good thing or a bad thing for Anna.

She didn't hate her Dad becuase he gave her those scars and said that he did it becuase he loved her. Now she is older and probably realizes that what her father did was torture.

Maybe Anna will get revenge on him.

With all this media involved, I have a feeling that Anna is going to unleash her inner goddess toward them, and immediately she will regret it. Instead of people wanting to ask her questions, they will be afraid to approach her. Soon, Anna gets left alone, enjoys the peace and quiet, but it won't last long until she feels lonely and wishes that she can have attention again. Just a thought.

Does her mother know of Anna's super powers? Or did she think that Anna was going to throw up and that's why she apologized for her daughter's behaviour?

Now, does her Dad know about her powers? Her dad knows something is special. I guess we will find that out soon.

Um...who is Jerry? Is he the Dad? I don't remember the dads name.

When Anna swore at the crowd, I bet the felt a roar, or a gust of wind as she yelled. I mean, with all that commotion, how does a girl's yell hush a crowd like that? It's gotta be part of her power!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Jerry is the step dad. We're on the verge of a couple big revelations in this one, hang on, it's going to get bumpy!

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2015 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 7

Those kids are absolute dicks and deserve what's coming to them. I'm going to assume the Goddess is a completely seperate entity from Anna's self (like a demonic possesion, the demon takes control of your body and your consciousness just gets shoved into a corner to watch). I really hope she doesn't hurt any of "the vessel"'s friends like Veronica or her step sister (maybe she'll recruit them for her reign of destruction). You will get massive, MASSIVE bonus points from me if the Goddess speaks in the voice of the legion (multiple overlapping voices) and/or has other otherworldly attributes.

This is deserving of r/nosleep.

*fangirl squeal*

10/10 would recommend.



Author's Response:

The pieces will come together shortly, I shall not disappoint such high praise, ;)

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2015 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 7

So he's finally out, eh?

I'm expecting something to happen to Anna soon enough.



Author's Response:

So very very soon

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