Caleb doesn't seem that bad actually. He sounds like one of those people that insult or tease someone that they like or have a crush on. He probably just wants to see these girls mad, but I don't feel the hatred going to them. Maybe he does something later to piss them off. Right now, it looks like playful comebacks.

Is Veronica aware of Anna's abilities? I don't think so, becuase she gets confused when Anna is exhausted.

Valan and Veronica seem a little too nice to Anna. Especially Valan. I truly wonder how they became friends or if someone told Veronica and Valan to comfort Anna.

Not much happened in this chapter. Caleb did some insults, and Valan try to offersome help. That seems about it. Is this a build up for something? A typical day of Anna's life?

However, while not much happened, this chapter had great dialogue.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Just trying to link elements together, no Veronica doesn't know and as the back story catches up to the main story, we'll see how the V's linked up with Anna