Hmmm. Yes, this is much more darker than I expected.

Very gruesome. So many mangled body parts that it was kinda unexciting to read. Half the chapter was just the bruises, bone crushing, blood gushing. Didn't feel like an appetizing opening.

Anna seems like a troubled individual. I wonder what has led to her behaving this way.

To be honest, if this first chapter was written by a random writer, I probably wouldn't bother reading the next one. It just doesn't have that amazing intro that defines the main characters. Of course, with your reputation, I will stay tuned.

I, um sort of, can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading Tom, I always appreciate your feedback. This story is very dark but not with mindless destruction. You asked the perfect question, Why? This story will examine that question. unlike my other stories with several chapters of descriptive character development, I jumped right into the action and will now backtrack to fill in those details. If this isn't to you taste, no worries, i myself am unsure of its origins or my need to share it.