Date: June 14 2016 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh!! I thought Mr. Collins and Trent were the same person. Like I thought Trent was Mr. Collins's first name.
Now that makes sense.
[Report This]Date: March 06 2016 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story I especially like how much power they have, please continue
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review I am at an impasse with this story but haven't closed it out yet as I intend to write more.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2015 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
@Duggernaut. I like your type of stories. The killing and torture is mostly justified by lead giantess character and your characters don't turn into stupid one dimensional characters. She punish each one in an appropriate way. Anna is a person who can handle power, that's refreshing.
Author's Response:
Thanks Barrowman, I appreciate the input and hope to try to create some sense behind what character will or wont do as opposed to mindless mayhem, though, that can be fun once in a while too, :)
Date: October 10 2015 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
@vgiv, I think you are right about the doctor.
As for the my dark story comment, Duggernaut once mentioned earlier that this story is "darker than his usual" stories. His other stories have a of more frequent reviews which made me wonder maybe this story is a bit too dark.
Then again, nothing too dark has happened yet like something very cruel, but with many deaths do in fact make this story one of Duggernaut's darker tales. Perhaps it will be even darker with Anna's sadistic side coming up. Usually dark stuff sounds fun to read, so I can't wait!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your point of view. The doctor was the one who treated her when she was recovered from her father
Date: October 09 2015 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Pretty sure the doctor was that man Anna had shrunk. The one with cancer who helped her father. Possibly.
The story is far from the darkest I've seen, TomSpeedy. Other viewers may either have been busy, or me personally, have been dedicated to our own stories. I've been following this story but haven't gotten around to reviewing each chapter just yet.
Author's Response:
The doctor was the one who treated her when she was recovered from her father. Thanks for sharing your insight. I concur while darker for me this is far from some other stories here. Glad you are still enjoying
Date: October 01 2015 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Am I the only reviewer for this story now?
I guess this story is a bit "too" dark for the viewers.
Author's Response:
Or not dark enough...
Date: September 26 2015 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
All I can say an astounding story.
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to read and share your opinion. :)
[Report This]Date: September 21 2015 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
The fact that Adam did not panic upon capture to badly, implies he prepared and anticipated all this years in advance. He accepted shame and hate instead of love and honor, all to save someone when nobody would understand. He loves Anna more than she can possibly know.
So, Anna is a Goddess now. I wonder what she intends after she wreaks revenge?
Author's Response:
Indeed Adam is the tragic figure in this story being misunderstood by everyone except Anna who never blamed him. She is now something better who she was and the darkness of inanna. If her humanity deteriorates she may succumb to darker impulses. The fact she's kept Brenda alive is testament to her morality for now.
Date: September 02 2015 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
I had to re-login again after that review. Whew! Glad i finished it.
Also, at the end, I meant, I haven't used the "really's" in any other story other than "Tom's story".
So yeah, that was a wicked chapter. Good stuff, good job, etc. The plot is fabulous!
You know how to makes things deep without screwing it up. So many people involved that it seems realistic.
Such a good story! I think this one is going to be special. I don't know how, but it's going to break some barriers, get some achievements, perhaps some recognition from lots of people. Somehow there is something in this story that just feels powerful. Like wow, impressive writing.
Ok, I'm done with the compliments for now. I really, can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: August 29 2015 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just thought of something, how has Inanna been going from host to host? I mean, Anna herself was born in the 20th century, not during the Neolithic era, so the orignal Goddess could not go into her directly first.
I like how Anna smiles at Jerry's demise. She feels closure not guilt.
I hope there is away for Anna to keep that power. Would make for a powerful new Goddess.
Author's Response:
Inanna could have been a spirit body hoping for millenia moving from person to person throughout the ages. We'll see who comes out on top in the end
Date: August 27 2015 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
@TomSpeedy
Well, the goddess can shrink people... and is a female... and is attractive...
Well, we are officially under servitude of Inanna. All hail the goddess. Blasphemers shall be like Caleb.
Sorry, inner macrophile speaking. :)
Author's Response:
Lol no worries
[Report This]Date: August 27 2015 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
So her father loved her after all? Unexpected turn! Nice. Though I want to see this... Inanna wreck stuff for a bit first. She is certainly interesting. Whether she is a malevolent goddess who tortures for glee, or if her brutality with Caleb and Jerry is due to her vessels primal hate I would like to know. For all I know, Inanna is actually a powerful, benevolent, or at least considerate and civil deity. In the body of a sexy teenage girl.
You never know. She may lead us to better times. Just a fan theory.
Date: August 22 2015 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
youre my slaves review reminds me of something. In chapter 1, Anna seemed to forget Caleb's name, and seemed to have no remorse, neither take pleasure in hurting him. So possession, I assume. Anna is no longer in control at all, as it is this Goddess who is in full control. The real question is if Anna consented to it. Or if her father has to do with any of it.
Are the scars still on her back? You mentioned they healed but could that explain why she did not receive grafting, if they still are on her, I assume they are fragments of what they once were.
Author's Response:
You are correct, it would appear as if there is a disconnect between whatever was in chapter 1 and Anna - all shall be revealed fairly soon. Thanks for the input. i re-tooled chapter 4-8 to address the issue of skin grafting, hopefully making the sotry stronger.
[Report This]Date: August 21 2015 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
An application for release? This at least proves Anna's father has a desire to leave jail. Perhaps his work on Anna is not quiet finished yet? A few scars left incomplete, or something missing, maybe.
Anna is in what year in high school? Her father would have been imprisoned for almost twenty years depending on her age. Seems Anna has no hatred for her father. She barely even blinked at mention of his release. Either she is fearless, doesn't understand the implications of him, or has come to peace with what happened, perhaps.
Author's Response:
Hi vgiv, at the time of his capture, Adam Smith indicated he wasn't finished with Anna, at that time she was 11. He has spent 6 years 'getting better'. Anna is a junior in high school - Caleb a senior, Rachel a sophmore. You're right, the prospect of his release did not seem to be of any particular concer to her. Another consideration is that she has mentally blocked the worst of those memories away and is still suffering from some deep underlying psychological issues that were never completely resolved. Let's find out. :)
Date: August 19 2015 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Huh...very interesting. Dark and sadistic, yes, but quite a curious plot. I'll be paying attention to this one...
Author's Response:
Atypically dark for my tales, but hopefully everything will mesh together and make sense in the end.
[Report This]Date: August 18 2015 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
You mentioned that Anna's father carved chunks out of her flesh, correct? But it was also mentioned he used a scalpel to make a kind of Glasgow tattoo, scar, mark symbol. I'm confused, is the flesh gouged out to make the marks or is it simply cutting with the scalpel?
Love the concept for the story. I actually do love the bang effect the first chapter had, reminiscent of psychological thrillers where it begins with a murder, then cuts to four days ago or something similar. The very fast updates help.
Perhaps something in particular makes Anna so violent? But I get a feeling it has something to do with the goddess awakening. Perhaps a direct possession over Anna? Or maybe it simply strengthens her?
Either or totally different I am hooked.
Author's Response:
Thanks vgiv for sharing a review. Anna has both type of scarification, as cuneiform marks were gobbets of flesh removed, while the circular design and star on her back were made by incision. I probably could've clarified that a little better - inciteful question on your part, thanks.
Date: August 17 2015 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good so far!
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to read the story and share a review
Date: August 13 2015 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have to admit, I'm really glad I kept reading this story. Chapter 3 was some box office stuff right there. It's becoming one of your better stories. I thought it was going to be the worst, but now it's pretty darn good.
Remember when I said "I kinda um can't wait for the next chapter"? Yea, well, not anymore.
I really, really can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Glad you stuck around and are enjoying the story as we learn how Anna did what she did in chapter 1. As always thanks for the review
Date: August 12 2015 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oooh. You got me hooked.
Author's Response:
It will fall back into a familiar pattern of character development, but it is a dark and ugly story...
[Report This]Date: August 11 2015 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Much liked, as is the usual with your stories.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, this one is a different take on my own personal taste, but lets see where it goes...