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Reviewer: Darrennick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2020 5:05 AM Title: Shrunk and killed

Great concept, hope there are more micro stories in this site.

Reviewer: pete445 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2017 6:13 PM Title: Shrunk and killed

I loved this idea! Would you ever do something again? I love more ironic plots actually mixed with a cruel and sadistic elements.

Author's Response: What did you have in mind? A lot of my stories already focus around extreme size difference. Do you just mean writing a story where bacteria is the killer?

Reviewer: Trap Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2015 5:15 AM Title: Shrunk and killed

I'm a big micro fan - and a snot fan - so this was pretty good. Just the right amount of buildup, perfect reaction from the young ladies in the classroom, and a pretty soft, squishy science level all contributed to it.

Granted, since it was short, I can see places where you could add some more details - it seems to shift to the teacher's point of view partway through, without describing what kind of bacteria the shrunken students see. And this may just be a knee-jerk reaction, but I almost feel like the gender thing was kinda tacked-on, and could easily be replaced with something else that could give the same effect. Still, I enjoyed reading it, and I hope you enjoyed writing it!

Reviewer: genbarrison Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2015 7:53 PM Title: Shrunk and killed

Sad to hear you aren't into writing much anymore, you're pretty much my favorite smut writer. Thanks for this short story anyway.


Reviewer: sorsha Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12 2015 3:18 PM Title: Shrunk and killed

Wonderful story, I'd tell you it was too short but it was just long enough to be great!

Reviewer: Haloichigo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 11 2015 12:01 PM Title: Shrunk and killed

It is such a treat to read your stories since they don't come around often, but like your other stories I enjoyed it very much. I love micro and nano and I am also a fan of innovative ways to kill off tiny people. I have to say death by mucus is as weird to me as it is sexy and trust me I oddly found this sexy. It was short but I am just glad to see that you gave the time to write something and I know how you feel about not feeling up to writing and wanting more stories like this. Sometimes I also need an amazing micro story to get my writing juices going. Hopefully we both get to read stories like the ones we write in the future.

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2015 6:03 PM Title: Shrunk and killed



Reviewer: fated11 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2015 3:25 PM Title: Shrunk and killed

What a great short story

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