Date: October 06 2016 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting depiction of the food chain. Quirky interlude. Let's see what machinations you've in store. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! It took me all summer to do the background research, so I could keep the zoological terms straight.
Date: June 03 2016 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
All caught up! I still enjoy the voice you've employed to tell this tale and as always your attention to minutiae weaves a compelling and plausible framework to gives this story. All this horsing around...
Author's Response: Thank you. And, nice going with that last-second pun, there. :-)
Date: August 06 2015 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like the start, particularly the attention to detail typical to your work, and I'm curious to see where you take this tale.
Author's Response: Thanks! In the meantime, if you get the chance, peruse the Old Archive for this tale's inspiration. You can find it in the Titles section under "S" (for "Stranded").