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Reviewer: geeman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2016 12:56 PM Title: Prospect #7 Princess Elrina Myssia Pt.2

Seems like alot of work for someone who's prolly gonne end up hating him by the end of this! Maybe Erik really HAS lost his marbles!



Author's Response:

Completely possible considering his living hell(heaven) so far.

Reviewer: JDO Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2015 10:01 PM Title: The List

This is one of the best I've ever read. I came for the smut, stayed for the well written characters and fun plot. Please continue!

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2015 11:31 PM Title: Prospect #7 Princess Elrina Myssia Pt. 1

Ah, elves. Gotta love 'em. The princess's shyness and getting a glimpse at elven culture should make this an interesting segment.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2015 12:25 PM Title: Prospect #7 Princess Elrina Myssia Pt. 1

Comparing Elrina to Marie strikes me as a bit premature. If not, unfair.

Author's Response:

Oh no, he wasn't referring to her intlligence. More the awkward silences. Erik isn't exactly even handed to begin with though sooo...

Reviewer: Frosty1979 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2015 8:09 AM Title: The List

Love the setting and the character portrayals. They feel so much more alive than what you read in most other stories here.

Also hoping our hero will manage to visit all one hundred prospects.;)

Btw hoping to see some dark elves or even somewhat civilized humanoid races like Orcs too.

Also maybe you can make some prospects Queens themselves , who haven´t married yet and are somewhat older than the young princesses we had so far? Would imho add some further diversity to the future "cast".



Author's Response:

Well thats the plan. One hundred is quite a lot but shouls be doable haha.

Hmm, good suggestions there. I'm sure both races can be penciled in, was already playing around with the idea of Dark Elves for a bit after all. The one hundred prospects bit gives me quite a bit of flexibility to play with.

I hadn't thought about Queens, though I can see how that might shake things up a bit. Putting it on the list for possible future scenarioes.

Reviewer: Falconjudge Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2015 1:22 AM Title: The List

Man, this is definitely some of the higher-quality writing this site has to offer.  The characters and scenarios are interesting in more than just sexual ways, too!  Altogether awesome, keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thank you, good to know the characters are interesting even with the limited time that is had with some.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2015 12:37 AM Title: The List

Well that turned out pretty well, not sure if its all downhill from here.



Author's Response:

Pretty sure Erik doesn't know himself, the whole thing has been up and down for the most part!

Reviewer: Jacksmith Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2015 4:19 PM Title: Prospect #6 Princess Eva Redfist Pt.3

How surprisingly pleasant a turnout that was, considering their introduction. As I mentioned in that one request I made, I was hoping to see your protagonist come face to face with someone already much more than a physical match and have to contest her with alternate methods, and this was quite entertaining. I'm looking forward to him encountering that shy elf girl that was mentioned earlier as well.



Author's Response:

It was rather fun to write as well. Haven't done a morning after scene before so that was an enjoyable first. Well, one after a good bit of drinking at least.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2015 4:10 PM Title: Prospect #6 Princess Eva Redfist Pt.3

"He could only hope Eva and Lea weren't simply exceptions to a rule."

Methinks he doth hope in vain.*


*Ooops! Sorry; I thought this was Jack Kirby's "Tales of Asgard."

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2015 3:07 PM Title: Prospect #6 Princess Eva Redfist Pt.3

Eva is definitely my second favorite so far, but Lea is still in the lead.

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2015 2:24 PM Title: Prospect #6 Princess Eva Redfist Pt.3

6 down, 94 to go!

Not sure who I like more right now though. Lea or Eva. But like the prince said, I certainly hope they're not the only ones that the prince can, well, deal with.



Author's Response:

Well there are 94 more chances to see if they are haha!

Reviewer: jimmyjimmy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2015 10:09 PM Title: Prospect #6 Princess Eva Redfist Pt.2

erik and eva are adorable together

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2015 12:26 PM Title: Prospect #6 Princess Eva Redfist Pt.2

Ooooh!

That was nice!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2015 10:28 AM Title: Prospect #6 Princess Eva Redfist Pt.2

This chapter reminds me of that old c/w tune: "The Girls All Get Prettier At Closing Time."

;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2015 10:12 AM Title: Prospects #4&5 The Liolis Twins Pt. 3

Moral of the chapter?

"Incest is most definitely NOT best!"

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 11 2015 10:01 AM Title: Prospects #4&5 The Liolis Twins Pt. 1

If what I suspect is true, shouldn't this have included "incest" among the title page qualifiers?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2015 9:49 AM Title: Prospect #3 Knight-Princess Lea Silverhand Pt.3

This has been the most amiable first meeting, yet! Let's hope that doesn't mean the remaining 97 will all be worse.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2015 9:43 AM Title: Prospect #3 Knight-Princess Lea Silverhand Pt.2

So, she gets off on guys who cheat at chess?

I wonder how she feels about the ones who suck at checkers!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2015 9:27 AM Title: Prospect #2 Amelia Valendris Pt.3

"...it could only go up hill from here..."

Famous last words, Erik.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2015 9:24 AM Title: Prospect #2 Amelia Valendris Pt.2

Completely, utterly, figuratively, and literally!

X-D

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