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Reviewer: ILike Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2016 4:45 PM Title: The Scarlett States of Utopia

I would love seeing a sequel to this story. The idea of some poor college kid desperatly needs money and takes in some medicine/science testint job and is shrunk to nano size is awesome, of coruse him totally have no clue what he signs for, totally thinks it's just an ordinary testing job for new medicine or vitamine products. The ironic twist could be that at the same time, the facility takes testers for new products which on the other hands get paied too, though they just have the "ordinary" testing for new eating products, and the micro kid lands in their meals. The irony would be them both meeting before in the waiting room, and the girl maybe even walking in him and be like cant you watch where you step, hope you have a shitty day, just literally...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2015 4:09 PM Title: The Scarlett States of Utopia

Couldn't she just have wirelessly reprogrammed his brain to _make_ him her willing foot-slave? If not,...


...that could be a potential means of liberating America from Scarlett's dictatorship!

Author's Response:

She could, however, despite how smart she is, she's cocky. She would rather have fun with people, rather than simply control their minds. And this could lead to her downfall. Of course though, you'll have to wait and see what I have in store xD

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2015 11:50 AM Title: The Scarlett States of Utopia

I wonder where are all those women that "love" their husbands. Did they just go 'oh well, I guess I will have fun too' or are they in hiding so they don't get shrunk?

What about kids, teens, or even babies? Do male kids shrink while little girls stay big, or does this shrinking only happen once they reach a certain age or something?

Loving the idea of women giving Scarlet ideas. It could lead to many new possibilities.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Part of them are playing along, part are in hiding, and part failed and became tiny themselves.

As for younger males, they too have been shrunken. Even babies. She's a cruel, cruel woman.

There will be some interesting chapters coming up, that is for sure xD

I'll hope to have one up come Monday. C:

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