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Reviewer: DontHaveAPenName Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2016 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Choices

Are you going to continue writing these? Also if you do are you going to do any F/f I noticed the F/m at the top and was just wondering? Also these are great so far. I gave it an 8 for the rating. ^_^

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2015 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 2: Nourishment

Rather touched by the last part there, good job. 

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12 2015 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 2: Nourishment

I like Sharon. Strong character who doesn't act like a totall jerk because the government says, it's ok.
“They’re smaller than us. So they’re not humans.”. What a stupid way of thinking by the sheep people.



Author's Response: I completely agree with you. Sharon was my favorite character, and just because the people are better doesn't mean they're better. But thanks for showing interest in my story! :P

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2015 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 2: Nourishment

Oh wow, I wonder what she will do to them?



Author's Response: The suspense is real :D

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2015 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: Choices

Well done

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: io1908 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2015 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: Choices

It's great, just keep the vore as a natural habit, not something sadistic necessarily, so it could fit nice

Author's Response: I personally aren't into vore, but I want to try to incorporate it in for the other people in this site.

Reviewer: noneaccount Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2015 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: Choices

Great job! Though, I love writing the more sadistic things, I know people have wanted to see a gentler side to this universe. I think this is a good start! You do a great job of maintaining the essence of White Smite while making it gentle.

The only complaint I have would be with the mechanics of the shrinking virus, but that's just being nitpicky.

Keep up the good work!

 



Author's Response: Thanks! You don't know how much this review from you means to me! I've admired your work for a long time, and it has motivated me a lot!

Reviewer: keithy159 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2015 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 1: Choices

I love it. Nothing better then coming home from work to a nice gentle story.
Hope you keep it up man. 



Author's Response: :D

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: Choices

I like this, delving into the gentler side of the White Smite universe.  Would have loved it if you described the giantess in greater detail. 



Author's Response: This was more of a test chapter to see if people would be interested in the story. My following chapters should be a bit better.

Reviewer: greaterthan3 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Choices

I love it, please keep writing this one!



Author's Response: Don't worry, I plan to!

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