Reviewer: Drew551 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2017 7:09 PM Title: Back to School Blues

I have read all of the chapters and so far I am a huge fan of the Toms Story that you have been writing. Janie is my favorite charact er. I always find myself checking to see if there is another new chapter up yet each and everyday. If it's alright with I wouldn't mind helping out with writing chapters to help keep things rolling. 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to invest in this story Drew551. While I think I could stretch this story out longer, for me it's bben a labor of love over the last couple of years. If you're so inclined to write, why not pick up a few of the characters and have some fun! I invite you to check out some of my other stories as well as those belonging to some very talented authors here on the site, and hope to see some of your work here :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2017 8:20 PM Title: Back to School Blues

Ah, well! Doesn't really matter. Happy 1000th review!!

:-)

Author's Response:

Woo-hoo!!!!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2017 12:14 PM Title: Back to School Blues

P.S.---I honestly think you'll be the first author, here, to break the four-digit mark on active reviews!

Author's Response:

Aanother reviewer stated there was another story that eclipsed that mark a while ago... but still holy smokes!

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2017 8:55 PM Title: Back to School Blues

Oh my god!  Tom gets coated in...everything.  Across the globe.  And he calls Janine a nympho?  Why am I thinking something about a kettle and a pot?  Hahaha.

Yeah, ya gotta love the new Janine.  She’s like ginger beer...she’s sweet, but she’s got bite.

I’m pretty sure Miss Harwood and Tom are gonna flirt forever.  When he graduates they’ll be exchanging flirty e mails.  Their grandkids are gonna be flirting with each other.  The chemistry is that strong!

The scene with Miss Addison was super sweet.  I’ve always pictured her collection as ceramic or porcelain, Tom’s gift was crystal.  It will always stand out.  Always draw the eye.  Always serve as a reminder.  Always be special, and hopefully always make Miss Addison feel special. 

This is Tom showing some real poetry in his soul.

It really is wrapping up nicely Duggernaut.

 

pix

Author's Response:

Throughout the story Tom is essentially a man who're would gets bounced around from woman to woman.  Yes he will always have fond memories of high school and a special place for Miss Harwood. You are correct I too envisioned ceramic or resin cast pieces in Miss Addisons collection and I wanted to demonstrate Tom's capacity for a feeling other than horny. 

 

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2017 6:46 PM Title: Back to School Blues

I like the moment with Miss Addison. She was a big fan of fairies and I remember her "enchanted forest" where Tom said she was obsessed with fairies. Tom made the right decisesion by easing the tension between them with this gift.

Damn Janine. Is she addicted to Tom? I mean, it's hot, but it's starting to feel strange. Sure, first day he is back, go fuck him all you want, but now she does it all the time. Sometimes I wonder if Tom just goes with it. As a tiny, he was forced to obey her. Now he just willingly submits to her.

That Miss Harwood scene felt a little weaker than I wanted. They exchanged a few lines, but I desired more. Maybe he gets caught in detention after school, or she visits him. Flirting is nice, but not enough for closure in my opinion. Especially with Janine dominating the stage right now, I want a little more from Katie.

Maybe next chapter could be "Not so fast" where Miss Harwood pulls him into her room as he walks by and she ties him up to chair or even the floor. Maybe "Final exam" where Miss Harwood does her tricks on a normal sized Tom. Miss Harwood should get a greater closing moment and since it's Tom's story, you know something like that will happen.

Maybe it doesn't have to be sexual. Perhaps, Miss Harwood schedules some tutoring for Tom with his mom and she approves and both Katie and Tom have a grin.

Well, I hope Katie physically makes Tom's wood hard.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

While I certainly could have written a more descriptive encounter between Katie and Tom, now that he's back to himself the dynamic has shifted much in the same way as Lina and Tom. That said, she was willing to engage in word play with him in front of the class. PS she will always give him hard wood!