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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2017 9:10 PM Title: Tit for Tat

To paraphrase a certain old folk song:

"When will he ever learn? When will Tom eveeeeeeeer learn?"

Author's Response:

Probably not, but who knows...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2017 12:37 PM Title: Tit for Tat

I love this woman's authority. She has fun with Tom's words but also has the last word.

I can't believe he called her white meat!! Lol!

Not much else to say that struck me this chapter. It was a nice exposition-like chapter with good info.

I'm not sure but I think I'm starting to like Antastatia a bit more.

Author's Response:

Tom, if anything is a sassy little bugger, literally I guess.

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2017 11:14 AM Title: Tit for Tat

Ya gotta wonder, is there some side effect to Tom Sr's gadget that makes the subject like super desirable.  Knowing Grandpa, that was probably the original intent.  Now he's just gotta find a way to make it work without the shrinking.  Or maybe not.

Alright, we've been all set up for the battle of the century: Nasty Anastasia VS. Hedy H-Bomb Smith.  Who will win and claim their tiny prize? 

Of course it might be a mistake to just view Tom as a pawn in this game.  He's gotten really good at this being tiny stuff.  Also, he know's there are some impressive reasources being brought up on his side.  He probably know's the smart move is to wait and watch and learn awhile, cuz help has got to be coming.

I kinda hope there's a nicer outcome for poor Natalya.  She at least was nice to him and looks to be a victim in all this. 

Super cool chapter Duggernaut, and a great, cheeky title by the way.  Oh,wait, I should save "cheeky" for a chapter with more butts.

Thanks,

pix




Author's Response:

Grandpa is a bit of a horn dog, so maybe he did it on purpose, or maybe tom junior just has that je ne sais quoi, either way, he is certainly an X factor.

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