Date: June 06 2017 9:24 PM Title: Meeting a Ghost
*yawns* does anything ever happen in this story?
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[Report This]Date: May 31 2017 10:45 PM Title: Meeting a Ghost
Oh! I like her.
Great bit of suspense building. Hedy seems like a real intellectual juggernaut. I really think this is a character I wouldn't like in real life, but can't take my eyes off in fiction.
Plus, I want her to save Tom. Who knew?
You've done it again Duggernaut.
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[Report This]Date: May 31 2017 7:40 PM Title: Meeting a Ghost
I don't seem to care much of this Hedy Smith. She does her job well, but I don't think she knows the urgency of the situation. Checking out Tom's room seems to be a waste of time.
There should be surveillance, fingerprints, or some other clue, than what we already know that has been found already in Tom's room.
So Tom's grandpa is like Edison? Their family is that famous? I guess that explains why the teachers actually care about Tom rather than just what his tiny body can provide.
Speaking of teachers, I still get dreams of these teachers and the weird part is that they are not playing with Tom, they are playing with me. It's oddly erotic and every second is kidnapped, I'm hoping that Miss Harwood has some sort of connection soon with Tom. Otherwise, I think she will find me, shrink me, and keep me. (I love it.)
Basically Hedy Smith is a good field agent and has begun analyzing Tom's disappearance.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: May 31 2017 5:44 PM Title: Meeting a Ghost
I love a gts-story that throws in a little real-world science (and/or current events), every now and then.
Bravo! :-)