Date: March 10 2017 8:39 PM Title: Back Home, Janine Sunday
Chpt 68 Back Home, Janine Sunday
HA! I told you: faking it. Still an evil cunt.
Tess, you're too smart to fall for her bullshit. But you're too nice to let her live with herself if she has changed. God.
I say err on the side of caution. Is knife the bitch still on the table?
[Report This]Date: March 04 2016 5:07 PM Title: Back Home, Janine Sunday
HAPPY 400TH REVIEW!!!!!! :-)
Author's Response:
Whew, thanks. Who knew this one was going to take off like it did?
Date: March 04 2016 4:08 PM Title: Back Home, Janine Sunday
Well, Tess made a mistake. Fortunately, Cassie, as a nurse, may understand the concept of a vulnerable person.
Author's Response:
Did she? Tess is pretty clever in her own right. Cassidy is certainly good natured and means well, but she's not as adept at the games as Tess or Janine. Things are heating back up
Date: March 03 2016 7:56 PM Title: Back Home, Janine Sunday
Yeah right Janine, yeah right...Your sister Jessica is the danger, not you, suuuure! For all we know Jessica might be much gentler than any gts so far, Janine on the other hand we know exactly what she'd do if she got her mittens on Tom!
Author's Response:
Lol, because the readers know what depths Janine has explored doesn't necessarily mean the other characters do. Maybe she was telling the truth about Jess? the best prevaricators often mingle in enough truth to be convincing... ;)
[Report This]Date: March 03 2016 7:24 PM Title: Back Home, Janine Sunday
What? Janine is already better? I thought she was going to be stuck in that hospital for a month. Well, now that she is back. The chase for Tom is back!
Damn Jess! I never thought you were this interested in Tom. I mean, yes, you were curious about a tiny man, but you seem desperate now asking all these questions to Janine even when she is not completely better.
Why is Tess so gullible? You know Janine just wants Tom back. I mean, really? An apology? That's it? Tess should've sniffed this lie out from her. Tess should've demanded like a present or something. (I'm not talking about sex.)
And the school is sad for her.... wow. All us readers knows she's like the villiain now, so it's amazing to see them feel sorry for her becuase this students haven't witnessed the brutal carnage that she did with Tom. I would've laughed if some random voice among the crowd just yelled "Is Tom still inside you!?" Janine would freak out, haha.
Janine's like "Just a bump". More like the bump that Tom created while pleasuring her and now she misses that.
Wow, all this mess created becuase of Janine's poor driving. Boy, she did it this time. Now it costs her the chance to get Tom again. We know she will eventually get him back, but now it's going to be challenging.
Let's get back to the sexy action with Cassidy aka Cassexy! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Tom likey Cassie. Very few at school know about Janine and Tom. could you imagine 20 or 30 of them fighting to gets thier hands on him?
[Report This]Date: March 03 2016 6:41 PM Title: Back Home, Janine Sunday
Awesome chapter, in almost every way/shape/form. For starters? There's Janine's analysis of Jessica. Considering what the former did to Tom (and secretly and unrepentantly _still_ plans to do to him), for her to describe the latter as potentially dangerous is alarming, indeed!
Then, there's the mysterious and sinister phone call Lina made. If it wasn't to her lawyer, Serena (or some version of Paul Drake occasionally employed thereby), then who was ordered to dig up dirt on Cassidy? And what will Lina do with such info?
Furthermore; if Jessica does manage to grab Tom, ahead of her younger sister and mother, where will she flee with him to (ab)use him in private? Her college sorority? A mountain cabin? Maybe even out of the country?
Last, but not least: if the latter, will Jessica try to recruit Serena to her cause, in exchange for some not-so-flagrant dilecto by Tom?
To paraphrase the Platters: "Only youuuuuuuuu...can make our puzzlement light."
My one nitpick with this chapter, though (and this is where the "almost" comes in), is use of the phrase "very unique." As the latter word literally means "one of a kind," then use of the adjective would be meaningless. As there would be nothing similar (let alone, identical) to justify the use of descriptors like "very."
Author's Response:
Thank you for the input and the feedback. Nice use of the Platters. Spot on about the very unique - either it is or it isn't. Brings to mind the term, irregardless...:)