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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2015 5:15 PM Title: Janine

I really really like where this is going. Tom is a freaking badass.

This twitch that we all witness is a sign that he was faking the whole damn time. I bet after all that time with giantesses has given him time to learn some new skills.

Like two chapters ago, Tom was already making a plan to escape. We never knew how, but this time, he is using Janine to get out. It looks like he is going to make Janine choke right there on the stairs and only her mother will see this becuase Francis is in the car.

Janine will probably say that she is choking on something and won't give Lina a hint that it's Tom. Or Janine immediately coughs up Tom, and Lina sees a slobbered Tom get spit out. Lina takes Tom, Janine goes with Francis and Janine's whole plan backfires with Francine taking Janine out of the house instead of Lina. Freaking perfect idea Tom!

I doubt Janine will let Tom go all the way down to her stomach. She wants Tom more than anyone else. She sacrificed so much to get him. Now is she going to let him die, heck no. She would rather embarras herself by vomiting in front of her mother than let Tom die inside her.

I can picture it. Tom twitches, she swallows, Janine's eyes light up like deer in headlights. Lina is thinking "wtf up with her now." Then Tom pops out of Janine's mouth. Lina is shocked. Then awkward silence. Janine decides if she should put Tom back in her panties. Lina then demands for Tom and threatens for almost killing him.

Then we have 3 endings, I believe. Then either Janine runs away to the car with Tom, and Lina chases her. Or Lina gets the best of Janine and convinces Janine to hand Tom over. Or, some deal happens where they schedule times to have their own fun with Tom.

It's a cliffhanger, but we know something big is going to happen next chapter. Let's see what happens. I really, really, really can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2015 10:21 PM Title: Janine

Yes! Swallowed! Now my only question is what does Janine do now? Panic and rush past her mother to the bathroom and vomit him up? Shrug her shoulders and get into daddys car? Starts feeling sick and vomits him up once they reach their destination? Guess he wasn't faking!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2015 8:31 PM Title: Janine

Oh, shitsky! Now, he really _will be_ kaput! :-(

But, at least I got to be first reviewer, for once. :-)

Author's Response:

I updated twice yesterday and I think I might have deked TomSpeedy out letting you get the first shot at the review, :0

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