Reviewer: MacroGod Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2019 12:50 AM Title: On the Road Again

I can only imagine the horrors she has in store for Tom while her parents are out having dinner… ;) lol

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21 2015 5:13 PM Title: On the Road Again

Hmm. This chapter intrigues me. It was a well put chapter that showed a lot of things that I really wanted to see. It also has a lot of things to discuss. Let's begin.

First off, smart move by Janine to clean up Tom at the gas station. Before reading that part I was wondering if her parents would see her walking in with Tom in the container.

When she put Tom on the toilet seat, I thought she was going to let him take a piss too. I guess not. Maybe Tom takes a piss inside Janine. (That's sounds wrong, but who knows, Janine probably won't feel it within her secretions).

Ok, what up with the blue Gatorade? Any little detail in your stories have some importance later on. Is it a torture device for Tom, a pool for Tom, or just an excuse for her parents if they ask where she has been?

The collar is back! I'm glad there is no chain this time. The collar is enough to signify property and control. Janine is definately preparing something big with Tom soon.

Anyone else find it funny that Janine cleaned him up, then immediately rubs her vaginal fluid on him. She didn't really want him clean. She just wanted to remove Miss Addison's fluid off him.

The Dad seems pretty cool. Looks like a great, loving family. A bit too loving that Francis and Karolina are going to spend a lot of time together. Francis also likes Janine and he wants time to spend with her. Francis also bonds Janine and Lina. Not just Tom with their sexual play, but just family time and enjoying life. I can see it, and I right now I don't want it to be ruined. I could be wrong becuase I don't even know much about Francis.

You mentioned "a short distance off" twice with like 3 sentences. Nothing wrong except some may see it as redundant.

"An amused look on her face?" Was Lina really looking like that with that expression? Or was she playing along with Janine's experiment. I think there is something more than amusement she gave Janine.

Beautiful wordplay. "I got some cramming to do". Ok, this does not refer to her homework. Instead it seems like she meant she is going to cram Tom inside her all night and cram him in all her tight places.

I wouldn't say Janine has gotten any nicer. She is just prepping him for the night. She cleaned him up, and put him inside her. Usually girls don't immediately shove Tom inside them like that. Girls shove him in as the main event. For Janine, that's just the appetizer. Her main event will be more memorable to Tom. We can only wonder what that will be.

I really can't wait for the next chapter!