[Report This]Date: September 02 2015 11:11 AM Title: Karolina
You forgot the rest of that quote (to Alman) from "Amok Time."
"It is not logical! But, it is still often...true."
[Report This]Date: September 01 2015 3:56 AM Title: Karolina
Well it's sure nice to see Tom get a brief reprive from his earlier days of 'torment'
Though I reckon he seems very much like a self-destructive protagonist, exposing himself like that but more importantly, refusing or denying a phone-call to his sister to come rescue him Xd
Eventually he or Lina is gonna go one action to far leading to circumstances where that Phone-call home may no longer be an option for him xD
Author's Response:
Hindsight is 20/20 and sometimes the wanting is better than the having...sometimes
[Report This]Date: August 31 2015 8:41 PM Title: Karolina
i'm afraid Maximus and I will have to agree to permanently disagree. All of us readers, here, have an inner masochist we embrace to varying degrees. Otherwise, we wouldn't read these stories in the first place! But, there is _undeniably_ such a thing as too much of a good thing. And, that includes masochism!
Hence, to paraphrase Sean Connery at the end of HUNT FOR RED OCTOBER: "Sometimes, a little gentle giantess-interaction, every now and then, is a healthy thing."
And, to quote his favorite aphorism in THE UNTOUCHABLES: "Here endeth the lesson."
Author's Response:
"He pulls out a knife you pull put a gun. He put one of yours in the hospital you put one of his in the morgue. It's the Chicago way of doing business."
[Report This]Date: August 31 2015 8:37 PM Title: Karolina
Yessssssssss!!!!!!
Finally!!!!
I love it! Nice and slow and the best part was the mention of her husband! We all know what's coming soon.
I rarely say this, but I don't want any super sexy stuff in the next chapter with Karoline (panties) (nipple play) (mouth play). I prefer more talk with Karolina. Let's develop this relationship a bit more. We could have cleavage, a kiss, and perhaps some sexy talk, and then in the later chapters she can escalate it a bit.
I agree that Tom should be passed back to Janine, but not yet! Maybe after 8 chapters of Karolina! Man, her words are just seductive even though the dialogue is not sexual at all.
So you went with the Karolina doing her own thing and Tom getting her attention. I like it, especial Lina's response.
Oh yeah, good move by nicknaming her to Lina. It rolls off my tongue better. Lina is easier to type than Karolina anyway. (I bet that's why u changed it.) Ha!
Peeping Tom! Beautiful! I didn't even expect that! Good one.
We start off sexy and gentle and finish off sexy and sort of gentle. (Of course we expect Karolina to get naughty soon, as she realizes what is in her possession).
I feel happy...............yep. I don't know why. The sexy stuff hasnt arrived but I just feel good about this chapter. That's the power of Karolina.
I really can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Told you :P I'm not done yet
[Report This]Date: August 31 2015 7:43 PM Title: Karolina
Knew that was going to happen, was hoping it wouldn't and that Janine would get him back first but figured you'd have interaction between Lina and him. Not my cup of tea, I hate gentle but still very well written.
I'll just have to hope Janine is clever enough to get him back! Curious to see where you go with this, still have something cooking with Sam too I think.
Author's Response:
Janine is very clever and now motivated. We'll see if Sam gets a shot to play with tiny Tom.
Date: August 31 2015 6:35 PM Title: Karolina
Yay for Tom!
Author's Response:
For now...the eye of the storm
[Report This]Date: August 31 2015 5:11 PM Title: Karolina
That was very well written and, in my opinion, exactly what Tom needed. Lina seems very understanding and wasn't mad he saw her change but seemed to take his compliments in stride. I really hope that we see more of her in future chapters. Even though I think she's neglected by her husband I don't think she'll abuse Tom sexually for her own gain, at least not with him all bruised up. How he fell asleep was very sweet and actually didn't seem sexual at all even though he is currently sleeping on her giant tits. The 'worst' thing I see her doing is pleasuring herself while he's asleep. At any rate I'm really interested to see what Lina has in store for Tom.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback on the writing Tom is the author of his own circumstances so we'll see how things develop between Lina and Tom as he embraces his new situation.