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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2015 10:50 PM Title: Tess

Perhaps, if Tess were to pretend she was coming out of the closet (with regard to Janine's implied bisexuality), it might lull the latter into a false sense of security. Long enough for Sam and Tess to drag her into a real closet...

...and strip search her!*




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Author's Response:

Always good to have options and sometimes off the wall is right in the mark ;)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2015 9:42 PM Title: Tess

Hold on a second! There is no way that Sam just thought of that! That lightbulb stuff was some bs, I mean, that idea seemed to be like 1 in a million and she guessed it? Seems a bit unrealistic, but I will let it slide.

Trying to catch Janine? Hmm. That requires strategic planning, or a bit of luck.

These girls think that Tom still lives in underpants? (I think panties is a sexier word). Well, I think Tom should be placed in another set next chapter! :)

Sam reminds me of Sophie, especially when she described the feeling of a tiny in her bra and panties. She sure enjoys the thought. We know Tess does also, when she was on that airplane ride.

Even though I like this Tess investigation, I've been aching for Tom's next scene, especially with Karolina. There are so many ways to execute this chapter.

She can find him, ask what is he doing and stuff, then wonder if he was spying on her, and that could easily lead to a "you enjoyed the show" kinda thing and things will escalate fast.

She can walk around the room as Tom tries to avoid her, but Marolina keeps reaching for stuff that Tom is on and one by one, Tom dodges her, but eventually is caught.

She can walk toward the bed, and look at the mirror while she is posing. Tom gets distracted and walks toward the edge of the bed. Karolina suddenly sits down completely naked on the bed. She decides to put some panties on and Tom gets stuck in them.

She could also sit on the bed on Tom and suddenly get up wondering what she sat on. Then after seeing Tom, she wonders if he is ok and wants to take care of him.

She can also spot him and wonder what it feels like to have a tiny man under her control. She first asks if he wants it, and soon decides it's for the best that she will protect him if he agrees to please her.

She can find him, ask him about her daughters actions and gets aroused by each idea that Tom describes that he went through. Then Karolina decides to do some of this stuff in her own special way.

She can spot him and ask what happened. After learning about Janine's cruelty, she decides to hide Tom in some special spots that Janine will never even think of reaching into to get Tom.

Just some ideas in case you were still wondering on what to do. I'm pretty sure you have already decided, but just in case. (It's a really fun chapter to think about. Many things can happen!)

I really, really, really can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Karolina is the next chapter :)

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