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Reviewer: steatopygicgiantess Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2016 1:58 PM Title: Back to Jacob's

Please continue this great story.

Reviewer: Vanishing Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2015 1:36 PM Title: Back to Jacob's

dont like to be annoying, but this is one of my favorite shrinking stories! i love how cruel the woman is.  does she really think they are bugs, or pretending?  does she think they are bugs but imagine they are tiny, tiny boys for her pleasure to fart on?  please continue!



Author's Response:

Haha I'm glad you enjoyed it! As for the cruelty, I'm not sure either to be honest but I added a chapter and edited the earlier chapters, hope you enjoy.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2015 7:37 PM Title: Captain Lenard

Finally a story about a giantess mom with the shrunken protagonist as not her son! Thank you!

I have seen way too many mother-son stories, so it's relieving to see a mother and son's best friend story instead.

I love the attention you out for the butt and the farting action.

I was wondering if maybe Carla can put him down the front of her panties as well.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Vanishing Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2015 4:57 PM Title: Back to Jacob's

Hope you continue this.  who the fuck cares about realism?  it's a giantess story, fer ricecakes!  youre completely allowed to imagine a woman who gets pleasure from sticking a bug in her ass, imagining that the bug is a tiny human.  and you successfully create a palpable size difference.  i love the giantess farting stuff, hope she gets off on it and does lots more!

Reviewer: Isaac Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2015 8:25 AM Title: Back to Jacob's

When writing these stories, most of the content ends up being focused on the fetish content. That's OKAY. However, this isn't a good reason to rush through every other aspect of the story. There are numerous grammar mistakes within the first few sentences (specifically a lack of commas in the dialogue), and you almost never described the appearance or actions of the characters when speaking. Dialogue is also lacking, as it didn't give any context to the characters or their motivations. Also, flies fly, why would Carla think bugs running across the ground are flies? And what person in their sane mind would shove a fly up their ass? SHE'S A MOTHER? Her kids could have walked in, and she was busy cleaning. I get that there might be some, incredibly small, minority of the population that has macrophilia and would get sexual pleasure out of that, but in this context and for this character, it just comes off as incredibly odd. I understand that I can't ask you to make the story realistic, as most shrinking stories aren't within leagues of realism. However, as a writer, you need to try to make realistic characters.

However, I think the concept of a man suffering from his childhood memories of being tortured (in this way is just awesome) by his best friend's mother is great, I just think that you need to write more effectively.

 

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2015 10:53 PM Title: Back to Jacob's

Holy fuck!! YES YES YESSSSSSS!!! Keep this going I love giantess ass and gas!!! Don't quit! More more more!! Just a bit longer chapters though!

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