[Report This]Date: August 20 2015 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 16
Well, it was a virtual certainty that Charles was going to _let_ himself be captured.
I'm just surprised he held out so long! Maybe libido was temporarily cancelled out by loyalty. But, in terms of steadfast resistance? I think Dustin trumps John only because the former managed to escape from that bird cage on his own. Whereas, I give John the silver medal because he actually had the surprisingly bright idea of hiding in his own discarded clothes!
It's just too bad Simonetta had already cloned his cellphone.
And, on that boringly over-analytical note, I take leave of you until the next enthralling chapter. :-)
[Report This]Date: August 19 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 16
For some reason, I have difficulty going down the stairs two steps at a time. I can go up 2 at a time but not down. Anyone else get nervous going 2 steps at a time down the stairs?
Haha, even with Dustin telling Charles to stop looking, he can't resist the beauty of Simone!
Man, that sucks for Charles that he doesn't have his glasses. Why is he still staring? Isn't she blurry for him? Charles should be able to resist a blurry, naked woman. If he had his glasses, then I don't blame him.
Whoa, whoa, whoa! She just repaired his vision like that? She could make a fortune of she did that to everyone! Then again, she doesn't need anything. Not even money. She can do anything she wants.
Dustin became the only one left. At first it was just Charles, but then Dustin got back into the game. Come to think of it, this story is a game. Losers have sex, winners escape.
Personally, I would prefer to lose. I'm with Charles, these girls are the only hope on making you grow and the time you spend with them is not that bad. In fact, it's incredible.
Dustin is probably thinking that he had enough playtime and it's time for business. He is going for the escape to claim victory.
The question is.....then what? If Dustin escapes, there's not much he can do. I have a feeling that he is going to turn around and find another way to get out of the house, becuase he first has to grow. It's no point escaping while being a few inches tall.
I think Dustin is wasting his time now. He should try reasoning with these ladies into unshrunking him. That's his only option to leave the house safely.
As for Charles, he is not wasting his time. He is going to have some fun and it will definately be worth it!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Charles did as Simone asks, she might treat him extra gentle. Maybe.
[Report This]Date: August 19 2015 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 16
Dustin's the only one left. Will he be able to save Charles and John? Or will he fall captive as well?
Either way, I shall stick with this story!
Author's Response:
We shall see, or does dustin bail?