Date: August 13 2015 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh yeah! An update!
An interesting idea seems to be forming in the minds of our protagonists. But where will this idea lead them to?!
[Report This]Date: August 12 2015 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 14
Dustin is one of those guys that if you wanted to keep him prisoner, you need to keep him at a high tech facility.
A bird cage is nothing to him. He just busted out of there like he wanted to elude the giantesses the whole time.
So John is still inside Simone? Wow! And the girls are sleeping!?? I don't think John can sleep through that, let alone be able to breathe.
So are these guys going to make a slingshot/bow and arrow/grappling hook all in one device? That's genius! A weapon and a tool.
Haha, 2 hours for two guys to straighten a paper lip. That just sounds funny.
Charles just fell asleep. I wonder if he wakes up in a new location. :)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey tom, yeah Dustin is a restless spirit and he may need a leash, hmm, I think that appears in a different story I'm working on X-). I'll have it so john is able to get an arm out so he can at least breathe through a 'hot ass' night, :)
[Report This]Date: August 12 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 14
The GI's in the European Theater of World War II had a similar procedure of identification to protect against infiltration by bilingual Nazi spies. That is; till the latter started following news of NY Yankee baseball victories more closely! ;-)
Author's Response:
I got it from the Dirty Dozen, the clickers they used that unfortunately sounded alot like german lighters. Just wanted to demonstrate Dustin resourcefulness. As always, thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: August 12 2015 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
Hoo boy! Dustin's back in the game! :D
Too bad in doing so he's probably forfeited his ranking as favorite pet to pet in need of punishment. Not sure if his clever wiles will save him a second time upon capture :P
But at least Charles is glad to see him. Though he doesn't seem as fond of the girl's uses for their captives? I say he shouldn't knock it till he tries it, right? xD
-also incase you're wanting to be alerted on any slight typo's there was one that stuck out a bit in the first paragraph section:
Pausing, he listened to the sounds of the women breathing, hoping and praying one of them did get up suddenly.
You meant to say 'didn't' right? Not trying to be a grammar nazi or anything, that one just kinda stuck out to me as a contradiction to what Dustin was trying to achieve while escaping ^_^;
Author's Response:
Thanks Alman01, I appreciate your vigilance catching the typo, you're right it is definitely the opposite of what he wanted and it's funny, i think i've edited and then re-read and I'm like crap, another one? :P