[Report This]Date: August 11 2015 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 13
Alright! Well looks like John got his comuppance and so swiftly too. I guess Dustin's the favorite for the two of them so far... though it's hard to tell what's really a punishment in this game xD
But better yet, Charles! He's doing it! Could he become the unsung hero of this story? :D
He definitely deserves points for trying, now :)
Not a clue what he's gonna be able to do withthe pin and hair-tye but whatever the case I bet he gets to be declared the winner of this game. He deserves it after all ^_^
[Report This]Date: August 10 2015 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 13
Charles got the pin and the hair tie. I still have no idea what is the purpose of it. Dustin had an idea, but I'm not sure if Charles could think of it.
Haha, even when John was found so quickly, he still believed that the cops were on their way.
This chapter was hot. I wonder how long he will have to stay in there. I hope they keep him there for a long time.
Now that Charles is left, I really, really, wonder what is going to happen next, becuase I don't even have a lead on what he is going to do.
I guess I will find out soon. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Next chapter there is going to be a little twist, let's see how you like it, :)
[Report This]Date: August 10 2015 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 13
As usual, loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks!