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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2015 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 9

Leave it to the nerdy genius to be allergic to "Dustin" his nostrils.

X-D

Author's Response:

Lol, almost too easy, but I didn't see it, good job!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2015 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 9

Well this changes everything.

Dustin got captured instead of John, and Dustin was captured in her shoe! So now Simone's eagerness to find John has subsided and now her attention goes to Dustin as she learns that he stole her laces.

This chapter felt a little shorter that usual, but it still was crucial to the story. I mean, Dustin getting captured was not what I expected. He was supposed to be the last guy in my opinion.

Also, how did the girls sense them? I didn't get that answer yet. I have yet to find out.

I finally understand the heart thing. It was a sign that the girls knew that they were there. Charles was right! I may be jumping to conclusions, but that's all I can think of right now. These girls are mysterious.

Blake is dead, Dustin captured, and John and Chalrie are left.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

It's always good to throw you a curve to keep you guessing which way the story is going to turn, :)

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