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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2015 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

Actually, that's pretty smart of John. Most any other shrunken man definitely _would_ want to stay as far as possible from the bedroom with the birdcages that could house one pair of sm's a piece.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2015 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 5

2 girls, 4 guys. Let's the games begin!

Simone obviously has experience with this, especially since she is aware that they are consious now.

Now Elizabeth has shown up, and now there are two girls that are too pretty to be real. Usually one girl like that is rare. 2 is a lottery.

I like this chapter becuase I was able to look at John and Blake more closely. Dustin is smart. Charles is unathletic. Blake is unathletic and a badass. John is smart, and a badass. Well, that's how I see it.

I bet these girls will trace the smell of cookies to find them. I wouldn't be surprised if there a bunch of little traps in the house as well.

Hiding in the master bedroom. Hmmm. Sounds like a good idea, but we still don't know how Simone and Elizabeth track their prey. Could be a risky hiding spot.

We shall see in the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom, this is starting to get interesting

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