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Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2015 10:06 PM Title: At Dark's Feet, and of Jonathan

A great chapter! I didn't really see any mistakes either. While I would've enjoyed a bit more, I can't blame you for losing your mojo after your Internet problems. I did enjoy how deep you went into the character and added your own personal touches. Well done!

Author's Response:

Why thank you, sir. 39, 39, 39.

I'm sure I made them, though.

Well, yeah, plot is kinda my thing. If I couldn't do that right, I'd be an abomination. 

Reviewer: jonnyjames9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2015 8:15 PM Title: At Dark's Feet, and of Jonathan

I don't see any mistakes.

Reviewer: TheChoreographer Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2015 7:56 PM Title: At Dark's Feet, and of Jonathan

Lucky dude...

All well and good here. Being underneath a Goddess seems to suit this latest little one. Written well, as usual. No complaints, just envy... ^-^ 



Author's Response:

For Jonathan, I'm guessing. 

Thanks, but I'm not really feeling it. I know I screwed up somewhere . . .

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