Date: August 16 2015 5:05 AM Title: A Strange Encounter
As of the last month, there have been no stories that interest me. I understand you have stuff to do but PLEASE write just write another chapter
Date: August 02 2015 7:15 AM Title: A Strange Encounter
I LOVE THIS STORY!!PLEASE don't stop now!!
[Report This]Date: July 24 2015 3:42 PM Title: Lexi's Big Mouth
Very good!
I am looking forward to continued ...
Farts would be cool.
Author's Response:
Thanks! And I'll see what I can do.
[Report This]Date: July 24 2015 9:59 AM Title: Lexi's Big Mouth
Even if that white-haired girl _is_ behind the other disappearances, what does Jason have to confess to; being a cheapskate? Lexi already knew that. But, what if Lexi is the one who has to confess something, in order to break his spell? Like, say, the name of the other boyfriend Michelle alluded to before the abrupt (and somewhat obvious) change of subject.
Author's Response:
I'm glad my story has created enough intrigue for people to hypothesize the outcome, thanks!
[Report This]Date: July 22 2015 6:31 PM Title: Lexi's Big Mouth
When the white girl said "Come find me" it reminded me of a scene from the movie "Edge of tommoorow".
If you took it from that movie, then I applaud you, becuase it fits perfectly with this story. While the main character is with Lexi, there is this hidden backstory of when he first shrunk.
If there is no food in my house and I had to hide a tiny person, I would just go drive thru. Seems a bit easier than eating at a restaurant.
Michelle seems like witch. The way she muttered something and soon, all the boys got covered in soda.
Michelle is probably grossed out by what she saw Lexi do. I mean, she used a tissue to wipe her face and she sees something from the tissue fell into her soup. Then Lexi wants to try Michelle's soup, and she scoops up the object to her mouth. Michelle is either grossed out or used to it since its Lexi.
At this rate, I think that Lexi will lose her control on him. It just seems bound to happen. However, her playful and silly attitude allows her to cover her mistakes without people raising suspicion.
This carelessness by Lexi could be risky, but it sure makes others not suspect her of anything fishy. (Besides her breath right now.)
No need to apologize for an absence. Everyone has summer plans. Just upload when you get the time to do it.
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for catching the reference haha. And Michelle didn't see Jason falling from Lexi's tissue, Lexi simply wanted to avoid Michelle accidentally swallowing her companion. Glad you enjoy it!
Date: July 22 2015 3:07 PM Title: Lexi's Big Mouth
I would think that her morning breath would be more pungent than of the fresh shrimp XP. Really glad to see some mouthplay after that preview of her breath we got last chapter. Totally looking forward to the rest of the story.
I wonder if the guy Lexi is crushing on is Jason, hmm. How does that saying go? "The way to a man's heart is throught your stomach" or something?
Seriously though, love the great presentation of the friendly/careless slob giantess and the variety of situations. Personally hoping she doesn't spit him out right away (or brush later XD) but I'll keep reading either way.
Author's Response:
Nice speculation, and thanks for the review! Of the four main female characters I've written, carelessness has been a part of three to fuel the unaware scenes, so I'm glad you like that trait. And her putting him in her mouth was really only to prevent Michelle from seeing him, also to get some mouthplay. I don't plan on having Lexi swallow my main character :).
Date: July 20 2015 3:37 AM Title: A Strange Encounter
DONT STOP NOW!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Just posted the next chapter, sorry for the wait!
[Report This]Date: July 06 2015 8:29 AM Title: A Strange Encounter
I love the carelessness so few stories managed to do it well. Geat story keep it up.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I've gotten really used to writing unaware, so I'm glad I've improved.
[Report This]Date: July 05 2015 9:38 PM Title: Getting Closer to Lexi
Refreshingly gentle shower scene. Me likey! :-)
Author's Response:
Yeah, I try to keep things from getting too violent lol
[Report This]Date: July 05 2015 9:34 PM Title: Getting Her Attention
Doesn't she want to clean him off, at least? I would definitely NOT want a snot-covered sw massaging my feet!
Author's Response:
Well she doesn't intend him on using him as a foot massager.......yet lol
[Report This]Date: July 05 2015 3:38 PM Title: Getting Closer to Lexi
I agree, the bowl idea was very creative.
Jason got a mini pool inside a bigger one. I thought it would have been even better if Jason's bowl was like a ship, and Lexi would act like a monster trying to flip the boat(bowl) over.
That shower scene was amusing, and very realistic unlike most shower scenes in most stories.
The hair whip happens all the time and people rarely use it, so I'm glad you used it. It also is a good cause for an unaware scene.
Also, Lexi probably scrubbed her butt harder than other places because she probably was planning on playing with Jason with it. So it made sense that Jason falls off the soap and gets trapped in her underwear.
I would like to see Lexi drop Jason in the front of her panties soon as well. She sure is playful.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks again for the great review! I try to write my characters as realistically as possible, and almost never do I write with the main character having a gts fetish. And actually, while Lexi is a very playful character, she doesn't intend to torture Jason. Sure she teases him, but all the major stuff like him falling in the back of her bikini bottom is gonna be unaware, because it's not really a realistic urge for her to shove him up her ass. Also, I don't plan on doing insertion, it's not a category I'm personally fond of, and I can't see Lexi, as a character, completely ignoring her friend and doing something like that for her own pleasure.
[Report This]Date: July 04 2015 6:27 PM Title: Getting Her Attention
I really like this story.
There's a vacation to enjoy, but there is also a riddle to solve. However, I don't think Lexi intends on solving that riddle, because of Jason's current size.
I also like the variety of body parts that Jason has been through: Feet, nose, breasts, and ears. I would love to see some action with her mouth and everything below her belly button.
Lexi seems very playful. I like her attitude and how she reacts to certain situations.
I wonder what is in store for Jason next.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to write such a well thought out review! I'm glad you enjoy it, and I try to write as much variety in as I can, so there's something for everyone to enjoy. Also my typical posting regime would be two chapters a day, but seeing as its a holiday weekend, I've only been posting once a morning. I plan to include more of what you mentioned in future chapters, as I have about 4 or 5 more planned out in the story. Thanks again for the review!
[Report This]Date: July 04 2015 8:19 AM Title: A Strange Encounter
When will there be butt action??!! So far it's such a good story im always checking for an update lol.
Author's Response:
Probably within the next chapter or two. Thanks so much for the review, and I'm glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: July 03 2015 2:33 PM Title: Some Minor Turbulence
Hopefully, her BO will euthanize him before she discovers him at his current size in her current emotional state
[Report This]Date: July 03 2015 6:41 AM Title: A Strange Encounter
You're welcome. And, when it comes to consistent and courteous reviews, I always try to give as good as I get.
[Report This]Date: July 02 2015 12:42 PM Title: A Strange Encounter
Well, at least cinnamon is a more pleasant smell than putrid foot odor.
Author's Response:
Thanks for being such a consistent reviewer of my stories haha, and yeah it really is.