[Report This]Date: July 02 2015 9:07 PM Title: Gaby's Chapter
This story was really hot!! Not only was there one beautiful giantess involved ,but there was a second named Gaby.. the well described Giantess is beautifully expressing just how much her size difference is dangerous yet at the same time very attractive.. I seriously recommend reading the first story for a better understanding :) by far my favorite story :)
Author's Response:
Thank you, Slade! :) I really appreciate your loyalty to my story. There will be many other giantesses involved, see you on Thursday!
[Report This]Date: July 02 2015 7:45 PM Title: Gaby's Chapter
These first two chapters were quite enjoyable to read. I especially enjoyed your prose. Your straight to the point when you need to be, diverse in terms of wording, and also flexible enough as an author to make good use of metaphors. tl;dr: You write good.
With all that said and done, I think the characters were the best part. In particular, Mike's interactions with Brianna in the first character struck a cord with me. Jealousy and need for dominance can be attractive features if done correctly. Also, that bit where she lied to him was cute.
Overall, good first story, hope I provided the type of feedback you needed.
Author's Response:
Your review is flattering :) I appreciate hearing what parts you enjoyed and the hearty explanation thereof... I hope you'll be back for the following chapters!