Date: August 24 2015 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
Ok, thanks for making that clear. I thought maybe that big society changing thing would lead to an Alpha-Beta-Omega society.
I dindn't mean "misery" per sé, but in like Stephen King's Misery book/movie.
They both use some major new world order themes, though there's a lot that separates them, in societal structure and the origins of size-changing capability.
I see what you mean now. This does have some tonal similarity to Misery, but we'll be seeing a shift in dynamics soon for Carly.
Date: August 24 2015 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
@Jacksmith. Is this story a prequel to the Omega stories?
The writing is good as always and you put much passion into your stories. But the Misery type of stories are just not for me. They drag on to long with annoying behaviour. But here we maybe have some interesting parts in Blackmail 5.
No, this is completely separate from Omega.
This whole series centers a lot on misery of some kind, so you might not be in luck there.
Date: August 24 2015 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 10: Very Little Blackmail
Is thisgonna be a 32 chapter story or a 10 chapter story? Cause I see some growth gonna happen soon. I have a feeling that it won't be Shrinkingly painful!!! Anyway! ENJOY!
It's hard to say about the length, but it will probably be somewhere between those numbers.
Date: August 23 2015 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 10: Very Little Blackmail
Wonderful...now Claire will be making this up to our wondergirl when this entire thing gets righted right?
Well, if her end of the deal isn't kept up, it's fair to assume Carly won't be happy.
Date: August 23 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 10: Very Little Blackmail
It is great to see Carly 'happy' again. It would be nice if Carly could explain the reason why she destoyed the samples to Claire. Is the device a shrinking/growing machine? Cause i think that would be better.... Is Claire gonna be an enemy? And will Carly an Jack join together to save the world? (▲.▲)
Reasons most likely wouldn't matter to Claire. The device is meant to shrink and regrow subjects. I can't say what Claire's full role is here, but she's likely not a protagonist-type.
Date: August 23 2015 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 10: Very Little Blackmail
Great chapter, it was nice seeing Carly being the one on the receiving end of some foot punishment for a change.
I do wonder how Carly thinks she's going to "hold" her brother, they are the same size.
To Carly, it's just sort of an inevitability that she'll get what she wants again; she hasn't thought out the specifics. :)
Date: August 20 2015 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 9: Just a Little Foot Rub
Well written story. I've been hoping Carly would finally get a taste of her own medicine being humiliated at the feet of one of the other female Giantesses....
Thanks! We may well see that exact act take place in a chapter soon.
Date: August 18 2015 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 9: Just a Little Foot Rub
I was just thinking, you could have made Jack struggle more... "Rigid as you are already, you let her do it without rebellion.“Please,” you beg quietly, already grasping the inevitable but trying regardless to salvage what remains of your dignity. Yourown physical resistance wasn’t even enough. This is all you’ve got left. “Pleasedon’t make me do this.” After this, Jack could have knelt down beside the couch, holding Carly's feet, begged for 'mercy'. He would then break out in tears and grip the couch. Then Carly would console him wiping his face with her feet.!!! Just a thought.... and tjen the story continues as it you have written it.
Certainly it's an image that would fit in with the story. Ultimately though there are probably infinite things I could add to the action and still have it fit in, but the chapters would get unmanageably long if I did that.
Date: August 17 2015 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 9: Just a Little Foot Rub
Great stuff!!! Feel a little sad its just a dream. But its not bad. You even rhymed in a few places. 10 means the highest rating.
Thanks for reading. Dreams have a large role in this story, though sooner or later it may not just be the character's imagination...
Date: August 17 2015 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 9: Just a Little Foot Rub
When it comes to sensually describing toe jobs I think you may have surpasses Cayce in my opinion.
This was definitely a chapter for me and it absolutely did not disappoint.
Although Dr. Felton seems as professional as all get out(partly why I like her character so much) I would like to see him(can't believe I forgot the protag's name) display signs of transference or displacement(can't remember the correct term). I learned about this from years of watching Fraser hahaha(still makes me feel smart to watch it). But I obviously have no idea what you have planned for your story but if the good doctor has a larger role then I'd like to see him start to have feelings for her but she will still try and keep things professional because she wants to help him. I just think that that would be a neat side story to have and maybe her having feelings toward him as well(subconsciously of course).
Anyways, sorry to go off on some weird tangent. I like this story and I can't wait to see what you have planned next.
Thanks! That's definitely high praise. Interesting thought about Dr. Felton. That's not really the direction things are going with her (she's really there more to help the protagonist root through his mind) - that, and there's probably a fifteen year age difference between the two of them. Nevertheless I hope you like what's to come. The thought of displacement isn't terribly far off, either...
Date: August 15 2015 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 8: Friends in Low Places
I'm fine with the subject... I meant that I can't wait for the next one. What I meant was there was not too much info in the story. it was just that a scientist took samples from Carly and Carly spoilt it. Well, thats how I felt when I read it the first time. Good job though. Seems like you want this story (Blackmail 5) to be long too. You Suspended the story at the right point. Lol (^.^) 10 is the highest rating right?
Individual chapters of the story don't often have a lot of plot motion on their own. Like the earlier ones in the series, it's really about interaction with the characters. In this case, Carly trying to show her dominance still. Hence why I wondered if it's not suited to you, since that's really how all the stories have been.
Date: August 14 2015 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
Actually made an account for the site just to leave this review. I really enjoy your work!Hit all the right notes with Jack's torment, and because of that, along with Carly's absurd ego, it hits cathartic notes in all the right ways when she has that taken away from her. You're definitely one of the better writers in about this stuff that I've seen :) You strike an amazing balance between traditional giantess torment, combined with the Jack actually winning out in the end (okay, technically it was Sophie that won, and Jack's still suffering for it in this one, but hopefully he can push through that!)
The shrunken victim (Jack) actually winning is such a rarity in these tales, but so amazingly satisfying when it does happen. Keep up the awesome work! I'll be watching.
Hey, thanks, I appreciate it. Glad you're liking the balance. Hope you enjoy what's to come.
Date: August 12 2015 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
@AdamX Actually, i think Carly might be the one painting Michelle's toes. I get the feeling that she's not as meek as Carly thinks she is.
Author's Response: If not Michelle, certainly someone is going to be unhappy with Carly.
Date: August 11 2015 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 8: Friends in Low Places
Good stuff, I expect Michelle will be briefed on how Carly likes her toes painted when this horrible nightmare is over.
Author's Response: Certainly Carly will be looking for some kind of retribution here, if the opportunity arises.
Date: August 11 2015 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 8: Friends in Low Places
Well... not impressed that much... I can see you are trying toinuh alternate the scenes... This part was necessary though. Seems like the main part is towards the end. I want to know about Jack.
Author's Response: Well, the story is about both Jack and Carly, and it's mostly focused on Jack up to now, so I don't really know what to say. Maybe the subject matter isn't suited to you.