Date: May 13 2016 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 20: Her World
1. Holy shit.
2. Kind of sad to see Carly not turn Michelle into her new Jack.
3. Kind of anti-climatic for June.
4. I am happy to wait on Attack of the 150 Carly because well it's Carly Anton.
Bravo good sir, I'd still love to read a Family Reunion follow up when all this Carly business wraps up with her lording over her minions...surely. ;)
Ha. I know parts of the story probably made it seem like Carly would enslave Michelle next, though she really doesn't care at all about her because of how easily she twisted her - she just wants Jack back. As for June, I know some people were hoping to see her appear in this, though hopefully the fact that she's not confirmed as dead is enough of a hint for now. ;)
I would like to return to Family Reunion at some point.
Date: May 13 2016 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 20: Her World
Oh my god, you made my dream come true. A properly giantess sized Carly, capable of terrify the world, and not just her little bro now. I wouldn't say he is lucky because he is probably the only one that will never be hurt or killed, being the center of her world where she is the Goddess, the main reason that makes her want to live. I'd say for him to be more scared, because now his mind can break for sure, because now Carly's personality and ego matches 100% with her new size and power. Her words doesn't affect exclusively her little bro anymore, her words and actions now apply to every single living being on Earth. And this will certainly mess even more with her head. To empower even more the image of Goddess she has about herself. I'm desperately anxious to see the next part now. Yes, I hate you, and I love you.
Hehe, glad to hear it. You're right that Jack is no longer the only one subject to Carly's words, though he's still definitely at the center of her attention, no matter what she does next.
Date: May 10 2016 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 19: Sister vs. Brother
Miss Carly Arton should be just shy of six feet tall soon or we riot. Why don't you tell us about what happened with Jack during those five years with Carly? If Oliver Queen can become The Arrow after staying for 5 years in hell, I'm sure Jack Arton must've done something worth sharing during those five years. Why doesn't anyone want them Flashbacks? What happened after Sisterly Subjugation?
Ha. There will be some size changing in the next chapter, though I won't say for who or in what direction. I actually did write about those 5 years. That's what the fourth story in this series is about.
Date: May 10 2016 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 19: Sister vs. Brother
Amazing chapter, absolutely loved it, and I'm grateful for the quick update. You wrote Carly perfectly for this chapter. You captured her somewhat psychotic and twisted love and passion for Jack, one of my favorite characteristics about her, extremely well. When the chapter was building up to Carly talking about getting her life back together with Jack, part of me was hoping for Jack to reciprocate Carly's twisted love for him, but I'm also glad Jack stood up for himself and threw down the ultimatum at Carly that he will never be her property again. The emotions Carly displayed of sadness, longing and desire before Jack's ultimatum, as well as her break down and anguish afterwards were also really well done, some of the best writing to date. Although as you said, Carly is not out of this yet, and it'll be interesting to see what will happen with her next. Also wonder what will happen with Jack now, as well as Sophie. Before the whole kidnapping, I was predicting/hoping Jack would develop a relationship with Sophie where Jack finds resolution for, and satisfies, his lust and desire for feet, but still retaining his humanity since its with someone who actually loves and cares for him in an honest and positive way. But after the reintroduction of Carly, I dunno what to expect/ what I want to happen, but I trust where you will take this story. Amazing work so far, always glad to read your work.
Thanks for the in depth review! The hint of a lustful relationship with Sophie's feet at the end of that other chapter was more to symbolize Jack's residual need to resolve things with Carly, but I can understand the expectation there. I like to keep people guessing.
Date: May 09 2016 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 19: Sister vs. Brother
I never do, though part of me thinks she'll end up with Claire underfoot somehow...maybe Michelle too.
I won't ruin it for now, but Carly will be slightly happier in the next chapter than she was in this one.
Date: May 09 2016 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
I'm really eager to see where the story will go.
I've been wondering if Jack would actually get even smaller because of the experiments going wrong (or right)
Hehe. Certainly Carly would be hoping for something like that for Jack.
Date: May 05 2016 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 18: Heart and Sole
very interesting. so naughty.
i often think about these sorts of scenarios. when the victim get's closure with their abuser. at the same size again. in my mind i go right for the throat. Jack has been so effectively reconditioned that he's become a rare breed with depersonalization alongside his Stockholm Syndrome.
all good things come to an end but this story? WHY!?
Jack is, essentially, going through a hyper-real version of stockholm syndrome in this story. Plus a general distortion of his reality. Fun stuff.
Date: May 04 2016 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 18: Heart and Sole
I am assuming Carly goes full rage mode on the redhead when she can, no amount of army training can withstand JV captain rage.
Carly is not going to be pleased with the redhead by the end of this story, let's say that.
Date: May 04 2016 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 18: Heart and Sole
Amazing chapter, the reunion between Jack and Carly was great, it's nice to see them falling into their old ways so easily, you captured Carly's actions and reactions perfectly towards the end of this chapter, but I wonder if Jack will continue being accepting of what's happening to him, or try to resist. Either way, I'm eager to see what happens next. Poor Sophie though, I hope nothing too bad happens to her. Really great chapter, definitely worth the wait, but I hope we don't have to wait to long for the next one because you left us with a great ending scene and I'm eager to see what happens next.
We'll definitely see some more struggle out of Jack in the next chapter, but it won't be an easy one. I plan to post the next chapter fairly soon.
Date: April 26 2016 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 17: Sophie's Pet Cousin
i was so enjoying Jack's therapy. sounds like could be heading back home to Her feet. didn't he have a girlfriend before too? she would have been good to meet.
looking forward to it ;)
Unless I'm forgetting something major, Jack doesn't have a girlfriend - he's had dates and whatnot, but didn't have a relationship at the time of his shrinking. And yes, he'll be getting much closer to Carly's feet in the coming chapters than he has in the rest of this story.
Date: April 22 2016 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 17: Sophie's Pet Cousin
A Little Blackmail series has been a part of our lives for like half a decade now, it is the benchmark for all giantess stories. Can make a movie or TV Series based on this not kidding. Carly is one the greatest characters of this genre, hence a humble request- please make Carly big again, it's heartbreaking to her see tiny. Let Jack stay shrunk and shrink Sophie as well and then let Carly do what she does best to her toy and her toy's special guardian angel. Bring the old and original series back again. Thank for existing, Jacksmith.
Very high praise. I appreciate the review. Without wanting to spoil anything, there will be plenty to like about the ending for the fans of a more powerful Carly.
Date: April 20 2016 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 17: Sophie's Pet Cousin
Great chapter, glad we got some foot interaction between Sophie and Jack. I hope there will be more but I understand if there won't be. Regarding Jack and his internal conflict, I'm conflicted myself. On one hand, you wanna root for Jack and hope he overcomes his need to be a toy and underfoot of a goddess since he is our main character, but on the other, the parts of this series where he is worshiping feet and devoting himself to them, especially the scene where he wholely devoted himself to Carly right before Sophie saved him in the third story of the series were some of the best parts of this series. As for the ending of this chapter, you've left us with quite a cliff hanger and I can't wait to read what happens next. Thanks for the update, eager to see what happens next.
Thanks for reviewing again. I totally get what you're saying about the thematic conflict of narrative vs. fetish content. I'm hopeful the ending will find a happy medium between those.
Date: April 20 2016 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
I've said it before but you are seriously next level as not just a fetish writer, but a writer period. This story proves it. The level of detail and level of insight into the minds of your two characters is impressive. Thanks for continuing to share your stuff with us
Thanks very much; it means a lot.