Reviews For Training Day
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Reviewer: DCDC420 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2015 6:28 PM Title: Stretch

I don't think you should have split this story up into chapters, but other than that I liked it. There was a bit of word repetition, but a lot better than plenty of other stories on here.

 

Also, I wholeheartedly approve of more giant blonde tomboys.

 



Author's Response:

I need to go back and re-word all of my stories someday.

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2015 2:33 AM Title: Self Control

I didn't mean that last review as a complaint, if anything it left me wanting more, which is a good thing. I'm really digging the mental humiliation, you've got a great balance going with it and the physical side of things. Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

I didn't take it as a complaint, it just meant you wanted more c:

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2015 1:38 AM Title: Rough Start

A bit of an abrupt ending, but it definitely leaves me wanting more. I really like the setting of the story, with the sparring, its a nice change from the regular settings. I can't wait to see more. 



Author's Response:

Topic change at the next line. Sorry :c

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2015 4:36 PM Title: Rough Start

Great stuff so farm, looking forward to more.

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