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Reviewer: wwebby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2015 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Short but good!

Reviewer: Mcayon Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2015 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

I don't often leave reviews, but I had to on this one. It was really intense from beginning to end, you really made it look like things would end well for him at first, but then the plot twisted in such a way that my gut went hollow. Had I been more sensitive I probably would've shed a tear since it ended in such a saddening way. I'd love to see more stories like this one, but with more happier endings.



Author's Response:

I was kind of feeling for a moment of writing a sadden twist, because a lot of stories here have had this expectency where the shrunken man was discovered by a beautiful giantess or fulfilling his fantasy. I wanted to write something similar like The Incredible Shrinking Man but with a more darker take. I appreciate your comment either way, and I really hope I'll continue writing stories but maybe the next one will have a happy ending.

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